Lutai Is on Fire, and You Say the Great Shang Can Still Be Saved?

I gave up after seeing more than 420 chapters. I started going to another world from chapter 390 and I didn't have the mood to continue reading. I started going to other worlds even before I finished writing The Ancient of Worlds. I read a lot of books in the Ancient of Worlds series and I don't know what I thought. They all finished the Ancient of Ancients and then left for other worlds. So I like to write about The Ancient of Worlds in other worlds, so why not just write about traveling through other worlds. Bye-Bye

After reading almost 370 chapters, let's talk about the reasons for the bad reviews: 1. It feels like a sudden change of players, with frequent mistakes in time points, inconsistencies, and direct dissuasion. For example, it was said before that the saint would take action in just one or two years, but it turned out that he did not take action for decades. 2. The pace is wrong. The pace of the article was fast before, but now it suddenly slows down, and the content may be missing. For example, when did the dragons and humans form an alliance? Zulongdu is still in Beihai. Where did the part about returning to Chaoge and forming an alliance go? 3. Mistakes are frequent. When did the Dragon Clan of the East China Sea obtain the secrets of Western teachings? To sum up, it is not terrible to make mistakes, but to be afraid of fatal mistakes. For Honghuang Wen, having problems with the timing is tantamount to seeking death. The originally okay novel became obscene because of this, not to mention that it later became an alien genre. You haven't unified the world since ancient times, and you haven't solved the problems of heaven and earth. Why do you want to be in another world? It's understandable that Dao Dao talks about other worlds again, but you are the only one who wants to talk about other worlds. This is equivalent to trying to learn linear algebra without learning 1+1.

The timeline is confusing, and the settings I just wrote are forgotten. There are too many typos

It looks fine from the front, but what's so messy from the back?

It was so bad that I was not in the mood to watch it anymore. The villain novel is not like the villain novel, and the protagonist novel is not like the protagonist novel.

It was fine in the front, but what happened was that the body was buried in the ground behind, and it was so disgusting.

After about 400 chapters, the writing becomes chaotic.

Shouldn't Renjiao and Chanjiao be abolished directly?

You can blow it to the sky, but you can't kill anyone in a long time.

The first part is okay, but there are so many typos in the second part that it's hard to read. I'm really speechless.