Konoha: Preparing to Defect When the System Arrives

At present, the plot can be connected, but there has not been a consistent main line. To put it simply, there is no goal or the goal is not established. At the beginning, the protagonist wants to avoid the fate of death, so he wants to run. There is a system in the back, just to avoid genocide. The result is that it becomes a mess after that. He is hoeing here and there, writing exactly where he thinks, like a headless chicken, hitting the wall before writing in another direction.

The writing style of this book is very fresh and natural, tending to ignore the depressed parts and show more positive emotions. It does not stick to the original main plot line and the protagonist of the plot, but also shows the characteristics of other characters. Multiple perspectives, foreshadowing, and all-in-one gags are advanced along with a sense of humor. You may feel that the protagonist is too useless and bullied by women in various ways when reading it, but later on, the protagonist's ultimate goal is to allow Madara to live in Konoha, and the description in the article shows that the protagonist is a person who values ​​family and friends more than anything else. He is not great but sincere, so he can better accept the protagonist's life. Perhaps the fly in the ointment is that the protagonist did not have the power to change the overall situation when he launched the plan. Obtaining the Eternal Kaleidoscope was somewhat unexpected and not inevitable as the system said.

As light as water

It's too watery, it's all sea water, the plot has no focus and no clear goal.