
Battle Through the Heavens: Bound to Xiao Xun'er from the Start, Tenfold Feedback
斗破:开局绑定萧薰儿,十倍反馈
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- Completed
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- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qimao
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It's okay, but unreasonable. Since it's ten times, why is the improvement so slow? Ten times is not a multiple for the author, but a setting. The setting of ten times is just to attract you to come in. The ten times magnification is just an attraction point. It's too bland to watch.
2026.02.21 16:51. No details, none at all. Create your own plot. Seize some opportunities, and there are still others. 16 The hero saves the beauty, Yafei will never forget it. 139 Just tell Xiao Yan Qinglian where the Earth's Core Fire is, but it doesn't help Hai Bodong. 168 Left a shadow in Medusa's heart. 169 Thought he would ask for Qinglian's Earth Heart Fire for Xiao Yan. 225 Proposed the unification of alchemy. 345 Didn't tell Xiao Yan that he could get the Qinglian Earth Core Fire. 870 Xiao Xun'er asked Xiao Ze to deal with the relationship between Mandala and Qing Yanjing. The origin of the 873 system. 7 Heroines: Xiao Xun'er, Medusa, Little Medical Fairy, Qing Lin, and Zi Yan. Mandala, Qingyan Jingwu overturns the chapter. No. 16, 20, 23-24, 27, 30-33, 35, 121, 124, 128, 163, 173, 214, 255, 258, 287, 334 Caressing, responsible, 335, 384, 519 Xiao Xun'er, 603-604 Medusa, 605, 631-632, 651-652 Little Medical Fairy, 677 Qinglin, 679 Ziyan, 870 requires imagination.
There is no innovation. Just walked Xiao Yan's path again. Then just write it as Xiao Yan. Stealing all the resources from others. All the women were robbed. Either he is showing off, or he is on the way to showing off.
It's okay, Shuangwen's framework has been built, there is a system and it has its own new opportunities. Poor handling of details: Since there are multiple female protagonists, Yafei and Yun Yun should not be a little regretful, and even Cao Ying and Dan Chen can consider it. At the beginning, it can suppress Medusa, and by solving Hai Bodong's problem, it can recruit a guardian for the family. The Qinglian Earth Core Fire can directly save Xiao Yan more time, so he can feel more at ease when he goes out. Medusa is said to be a bodyguard, but she is actually constantly being upgraded. The other female protagonists are also constantly upgraded. There are no detailed battle scenes, but only realms. Yunshan, Han Feng, the Soul Clan's Soul Devouring Soul Formation, all of them knew that they had the strength to handle the plot, but they still delayed the development of the plot. Alchemy is not expressed clearly enough. After taking away some of Xiao Yan's opportunities and adding new ones to him, why not also modify the plot of other opportunities to make them your own.
The 10 times return is ridiculous. Later, Xiao Xun'er broke through to Dou Saint 1 star, and the protagonist was actually only Dou Saint 2 star, and many of the protagonist's cultivation levels were increased by various opportunities. According to the 10 times return setting and the protagonist's own cultivation, the protagonist should have reached Dou Saint 9 stars long ago. This is pure intelligence reduction, and has nothing to do with the title.
Not bad, good-looking, great
How can I put it this way? The plot is basically about trying to steal Xiao Yan's opportunity. Although the protagonist himself has some other opportunities, he basically follows Xiao Yan's path and is just much better than him. It feels like the author pulls out Xiao Yan from time to time for comparison. (The protagonist in the article has a good relationship with Xiao Yan, but he doesn't like the backhanded comparison.) And there are quite a few girls, including the Little Medical Fairy, Qinglin, Medusa, and my childhood sweetheart Xun'er. In the original work, Xun'er was very sad when she heard about the incident between Xiao Yan and Medusa. Although she did not have an attack and even became sisters with Medusa, this was to prevent Xiao Yan from making things difficult and not to make others laugh. This is better, just open a harem directly. (╬◣ω◢) Xun'er's love is not your capital to do whatever you want. The eldest lady of the ancient clan, my father is at the peak of Dou Sheng. Before you became emperor, it would have been nice not to let you get married, and you were also a polygamist (┯_┯). Don't forget that Xun'er in the original novel is a little younger than Xiao Yan, but he is no weaker than Xiao Yan. She is just low-key! ! Especially after returning to the family. That is to say, Xiao Yan's name is almost written on the path of becoming an emperor by constantly devouring different fires.
A mess of timelines
It can be regarded as a relatively standard cool novel. It didn't falter, and it killed people when it was necessary. The relationship with the original protagonist was handled well, and at least the female protagonist didn't have a relationship until the end. However, the current environment is like this. It is understandable that there are higher requirements for multi-female protagonists. Let's keep up the good work.
I just want to ask Hai Xinyan, was Hai Xinyan eaten by the author? After killing Han Feng, where is Hai Xinyan? Did it just disappear?