My Deskmate Is Ferocious

Some holes have not been filled in. It is not clear what kind of job and background Xiaoxi's father has. Dahai's emotional line is too hasty, but the interest is relatively interesting and the style is relatively unique. It is good-looking and good-looking. The character development of each character is very good. There is no pleasure for the sake of pleasure. For example, the attitude change in the early morning will not turn around because the male protagonist turns over. There is also the feeling that the hint of Xiaoxi's identity is not obvious enough. There can be a step-by-step process to allow readers to slowly understand the truth from the clouds. For example, the memory of the male protagonist gradually becomes clearer, etc. I feel that the sudden discovery of the truth is too abrupt (the overt and secret fights in the business world are well written and more realistic than ordinary articles (for example, most articles are about finding higher-level officials to pressure and then the protagonist profits). I have not thought of other authors for the time being. Keep up the good work and hope to see better works.

It's very attractive. I almost didn't see the water injection. It's just too short. I'm going to read the author's other works.

Looking forward to the follow-up