Versatile Mage: The National Team Arc Is Over, and the System Has Arrived?

After reading this book, I felt like Shennong. As long as it's a woman, he'll have sex with her. I'm really going to collapse. How capable is the author? The entire structure basically follows the original work. Even if I write a system, it feels useless. It is based on the original work and takes back all the women. It feels like the protagonist is the king, and everything is given to him by the protagonist. Then if you don't listen to the protagonist, you will be beaten by him.

Your protagonist is a pure thoroughbred. If she's a woman, just get close to her.

A high-level person who was about to surpass the level killed a beginner and wrote 13 chapters of Zhen Shui.

There is some original plot but not much. It follows the main plot, especially the school competition and Tianshan. There is no change. The further you go, the more boring it gets.

Plus the emotional line is so awkward and boring.

Not bad

Lots of typos, stallion

No own content

There are so many flaws, I don't know what to complain about.