Cast Aside After My Triumph, I Founded the Supreme Immortal Sect. Now You Regret It?

I was thoroughly enjoying this book until chapter 148, but then I got impatient because I'm now desperately waiting for more! A word of advice to fellow readers who want an exhilarating read: jump right in. There's not a trace of forced "torture" or "death traps" here; the system is meant to be this way. Clear logic, high intelligence, decisive action… all are evident. And don't even think about using your brain when you read this.

It's alright. Chapters six and seven were a bit awkward, but still okay. The writing gets better and better as it goes on.

It's great, it gets better and better as it goes on, and the author hasn't messed up the writing.

Author, your writing is absolutely fantastic! I'm going to frantically urge you to update, vote for your work, write positive reviews, and give you a reward...

9.6? How was that rated?

The plot is well-designed, but the writing needs improvement. The characters are not well-developed enough, and the language is not fluent enough. Some parts are too deliberate. It would be better if it were written in a more natural tone and manner, like in a casual conversation.

Nice