Jianlai: Fishing in Lizhu Cave at the Beginning

So far, the writing is really good, better than other articles. Judging from other places so far, and comparing it, I feel that your writing is still good, not like a systematic one. I feel like it's better not to use it here, just have some system text class. A little cheat is much better than the system one. Also, updates are slow

Maybe everyone sees Jian Lai differently. I feel like the author didn't pay much attention to Jian Lai.

The plot is too far-fetched, and have you seen Jian Lai? There are so many details wrong, and even some characters are ooc 😂

A piece of writing written by Chen Pingping

You can watch it if you haven't read the original work. After reading the original work, some of the timelines are messed up. Are you writing this after watching the anime? I haven't watched the anime.

Come on

Not bad👍

Isn't this simply diverting Chen Ping'an's plot to the protagonist, and then the plot changed a little bit,

Fairly good

No sense of participation at all. It's all a plot with a new protagonist. It seems that I really don't know what to say.