Following in My Mother's Footsteps, I Become a Servant in a Wealthy Family

Isn't it good to kidnap the second young lady to death? How can a good book be ruined by the eldest lady who insists on ex-boyfriend? It is recommended that you just read the front part of the book. The back part of this book is a mess. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them blindly. And the rest of it is very boring. It feels disgusting when the protagonist tries to welcome the second lady but refuses her. I regret giving a good review. It was written by AI.

It's an enjoyable article that can only be read in the first few dozen chapters, and you'll have to abandon the article after one hundred chapters The initial settings of the story characters are pretty good But it is obviously an AI novel. The context does not make sense. The characters' actions and personalities are contradictory. I received news in the last chapter, but I don't know about it in the next chapter. The plot and the characters except the male protagonist are particularly confusing.

It's okay at first, but the last 50 pictures have started to write about the young lady's ex-boyfriend. The person who was cold at the beginning showed how humble he was towards his ex-scumbag boyfriend, who loved her but couldn't help it. It was really disgusting to read. It felt like he was not the same person as the previous ones. It was really a forced feeding of shit to the readers. I don't recommend reading it. I gave it a low score.

First of all, what I want to complain about is Old Man Zhong's granddaughter. Why does she appear? It can't promote the development of the emotional line, and it has nothing to do with the main line? What do you want to express by writing two chapters specifically? Highlight the protagonist's popularity with people, women, and peach blossoms? There are also a lot of girls who were added inexplicably and disappeared after just two chapters. I can't figure it out. Why write these? It does not help the development of the main plot, nor does it promote the development of the male and female protagonists' emotional lines. It is just for show. Then there is the attitude of the protagonist who is both serious and upright. He talks about focusing on his career while there are many women around him. If he really doesn't like it, he will immediately say that he doesn't like it. Damn it, without saying anything, he just puts it aside and establishes his character. He also calls it a "didn't want to talk about it until his career is successful". Love, damn, I'm speechless. The protagonist has a successful career, and it doesn't seem like a woman came to it. Don't talk about rushing to give resources. Have you seen him reject it? If you really want to rely on yourself, then don't accept the resources. Accepting resources without clearly expressing your stance is impure and serious. Finally, there is the male protagonist and his mother, who looks like an antique from the Qing Dynasty. What makes the male protagonist maintain a relationship with the two eldest ladies of the Chen family and have self-awareness? Toads cannot eat swan meat. I am really speechless. If you are blind, you need to cure it. Isn't it obvious enough that the two eldest ladies are contrary to each other? If the author really wants to add a little more frustration to this relationship, there is no need to be so disgusting. The biggest frustration in the relationship between the male and female protagonists is his mother, who even calls her a servant and is not worthy.

The 49th picture started with a different writer, right?

It looked okay at first, but around chapter 49-50, the plot fell apart inexplicably.

In fact, the subject matter and story are good, but there are many logical errors that are inconsistent with the context and I can't stand it.

The front and back are not consistent, and I have to write a plot about the eldest lady and her ex-boyfriend. There is no need to be so ex for readers Akashi.

What the hell is this? The more you look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. Does the character have a split personality? The first thing I wrote with the second lady was good, but the second part was so inconsistent. It was like this and then that. Do they have no memory? The last relationship was sweet and sweet, everyone in the family saw it, but later on it felt like they didn't know. The plot is really too divided, it's so disgusting. Either you should develop your relationship with the second lady, or you can directly develop your own career. The eldest lady appears again, and there is also a lawyer senior sister. Don't pretend to be the king of the sea. You will hang up all the comers. If you want to open a harem, you will take them away. Why are you hanging up all the people? What the hell is disgusting. Was it written by someone else? It's been a long time since I've commented on a book like this. It was so uncomfortable to read. After reading more than 200 chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. Later, I suggested that when Yongren finished and went to work in a law firm, he should run away. The author was really speechless and irresponsible.

I have read more than 320 chapters. I would like to give some reference to those who are interested in this. I still like the plot of being a servant. The beginning is suitable for conversations with uncomplicated relationships and high emotional intelligence. I find it very comfortable. The previous section is still worth recommending and is quite good. However, after I started working, I felt uncomfortable with the plot. I am very satisfied. The plot develops too fast and there are no details. Most of the time, the woman is quickly piling up resources for him. The emotional problems are a bit too dull. Sometimes it is clear that it is due to family background. The next time, it suddenly seems to have forgotten the matter, and the words become confused. I have read more than 320 chapters, so it is a pity to give up. If the author can see it, I hope to check it more when it is released to avoid confusing problems. I can write more plot details. (The following is a personal score. I played it by voice. The plot is okay, but the language behind the protagonist is a bit confusing, and the details of the characters and plot are a bit lacking. Compared with high-scoring classic works out of 10, I can give it a score of about 8. The speech with high emotional intelligence is a highlight. The outline is good, but the character details and plot advancement speed need to be optimized.)