Reborn: Return from the Underworld

It's too verbose. I suggest the author look at what others have written.

It's messy like a child playing, eating, drinking, having fun, beating, scolding, and killing people are not normal at all. I got drunk reading this kind of book.

Whoever reads the unfinished novel will regret it

I suggest you stop writing in the future. This kind of writing is really not interesting.