Kowloon Coffin Bearer

There is a group of people who scroll through comments one by one but never write any comments. There are many stories hidden in my heart, and I can only tell myself that joy, anger, sorrow, and joy are all a matter of one person. Hello! Stranger passing by. May you be greedy but not fat. May you be lazy and not ugly. May your deep love not be let down. I hope you have someone to accompany you for the rest of your life. Hello, stranger!

I feel like the protagonist hasn't grown up and always relies on others to fight. It's understandable in the beginning. After all, the protagonist has just taken over and doesn't understand anything. But after more than 900 chapters, he hasn't improved himself. It's really a bit annoying for readers.

The protagonist is so useless that as a Mr. Yin and Yang, no one can fight him. Everyone looks down on him and he can't slap others in the face. She says she is not a Holy Mother, but she is actually a great Holy Mother. A small character can write more than 180 chapters. I read more than 500 chapters and wrote about what happened in a month. It's really not necessary. In first-person writing, sometimes he doesn't tell you what's going on, and keeps hiding it. Why, we readers who are co-authors are outsiders?

I barely saw more than 170 pictures, but overall I was very angry. The protagonist's halo was added to his body, even though he could not die every time. But the way things were handled, his vision was completely stupid and cowardly. He seems to be loyal, but he has no brains, and he has all kinds of scruples and doesn't dare to work hard. We don't know how we, such a fool, survived. Except for Fatty, Huzi and other people around him can plot against him regardless of whether they are human or ghost. Then every time he was plotted against, it seemed like nothing was wrong with him, but it was Fatty Huzi and the two people who really treated him who were injured and bleeding. Oh my god, I'm so angry anyway.

My wife is so pretty

The further you read, the less interesting it becomes. You are almost catching up with cultivating immortals as you write. What about a nine-tailed fox that does not turn into bones, plus a lot of genres, and the content is also very nagging. After reading it for so long, a small foreshadowing has been delayed, and it has not been resolved in hundreds of chapters. Moreover, the protagonist doesn't need to know anything, and there is no vivid image at all. If you don't know how to write a book, don't write this kind of book.

Thank you. I was so scared that I couldn't sleep at night to catch up on my homework.

It's really good, so good that I can only use the adjective "good". It's really good and there's no other way. The content has twists and turns, ups and downs, and brings people wholeheartedly into Zhang Jiuyang's worldview in a way that directly touches the soul. "My name is Zhang Jiuyang, the last flame of the Fengniao clan!"

It looks good. It's really good. The foreshadowing is also very good. It doesn't matter if there are typos. I'm looking forward to Zhang Jiuyang's future legendary stories, including Fatty and Huzi. The plot is not exaggerated.

Everything else is good, but there are a few typos, please pay more attention later.