Fantasy: Starting Awakening Cultivation System

The plot is very good and the writing is very exciting. It's worth watching. Hope to update soon.

Writing without beginning or end

It's really poorly written. No one would even look at it. It's so poorly written. Tell me who will look at you. The first few are all caretakers. The navy he hired.

It's such a mess, whoever sees it will regret it, it's a waste of memory and time.

Your novel is very distinctive, and the writing and vocabulary are also very good in all aspects. But if you want to keep improving, you can actually think about it and revise it.

Rating 0.5. The protagonist is actually the reflection of the author. The protagonist is totally a 1000/4

Kindergarten level

The system is useless. I am still building foundation elixirs after ten or twenty chapters. Most of the articles are about bloody battles. They are too old and have plug-ins. When you are reborn from blood, the difficulty of rebirth needs a few chapters to explain in detail. After rebirth, you will soar into the sky and upgrade one or two levels a day. By the way, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, etc., The unstoppable trend is authentic, finally ascending, encountering the evil enemy with the same destiny and luck, comparing cultivation, luck, and upgrading, encountering a female pig's feet in the middle, justice finally defeats evil, a perfect ending, isn't it great?