I'm Lin Chong, the Heavenly Scourge Star, and From the Start I Cut Down Gao Yanei

After reading seven or eight chapters, I couldn't help but die from poison. The story was written in ink, and there was too much nonsense. Lin Chong's description of behavior was weird, his character was too disgusting, and there were too many plot details that were unreasonable. Especially after Lin Chong ran away, Gao Qiu's series of actions were extremely heartless. Ito Tong was also a mess and had nothing special at all.

The author did a great job in portraying the characters in "Water Margin", and he did not disappoint. In order to know more about the heroes in it, I read "Water Margin" again.

The author took a different approach, starting with Lin Chong as the head of Liangshan, gradually recruiting troops, and finally successfully established the country. The story is not cliche or cliche, the writing is smooth, and the pace is compact and not draggy. In addition, the open ending is very good compared to other unfinished books, and it arouses endless imagination. In fact, as far as this book is concerned, it only contains 1,000 photos. But the plot description is reasonable and orderly, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. Compared with many bad books, there are too many excellent ones. Come on, author!!

It's well written. The writing and plot are excellent. I hope the author will adopt some suggestions. There are many good generals in Water Margin, such as Li Zhu, Du Bo, Feng Tai, Yuen Long, Xiao Jiahui, Sun An, and Bian Xiang. As time travelers, these talents should be collected early.

First of all, the plot is too ink. Many of Water Margin's plots are somewhat lacking. The dialogue between the characters is long-winded, and what is said in the front is also said later. In addition, the author is just a novice and lays out a lot of general principles in each chapter. Some of the principles are similar. Repeatedly, the old lady bound her feet. The author's own life experiences and insights are brought into it at every turn. Are you writing a novel or a Bible?

It's just an update, a little slower, much better than I Am the Patron Saint of the Human Race!

The plot is ups and downs and fascinating, making people chase it every day, addicted to it, unable to stop, and giving a lot of boring people time to pass their time.

I also like to write novels and have written 40 novels. I wrote a book "The Four Bandits in the Late Northern Song Dynasty" and felt good about myself. Only after reading my brother's novels did I realize that his novels are even more exciting! Give me a reward!

It's a lot of nonsense, I've been messing around with numbers.

Wonderful plot