The Great Doctor: His First Surgery Stuns the World!

First: The personal inner monologue is not very good, it feels like just watching the show. Second: The character creation is not good, and I always feel that the vividness of the characters is lacking. Third: The plot is simple, just how powerful the surgery is, but lacks characterization, and the plot progresses too fast, just like writing a running account, and the author's outline is not written well. Fourth: The writing style is relatively immature. I have no idea how to proceed, and it feels like filling in lyrics. Comments from an Internet writer with 15 years of experience

3 Points short

Don't you feel tired? It's all about seeing a doctor, and the next one is always next, with no other plot at all.

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