I Reviewed a Horror Movie on Livestream, and Everything Turned Out to Be Real

The starting point and concept are very good, but does it make sense to teach the whole country to practice? Risking your life just to get a job in your position? The small details are not handled well and there are many far-fetched places... I am also writing a novel and this book cannot be corrected. I hope I will change it in the next book. I hope you will adopt it. Encouragement with you

It doesn't look good. First of all, let's complain about it ("). Is the author addicted to exclamation points? Why do so many endings end with exclamation points? It's outrageous to add an exclamation mark after a very plain sentence. Then there are the supporting characters, who are typical brainless. Everything is true within the range. Firearms like this are ineffective and directly disperse the civilians, and the cannons are full of vitality. Then there is the character of the protagonist, which I really can't stand. You have to use barrage typing, right? The reason for not going to the official website is too ridiculous. Even if it can't save people, is it faster to connect to a live broadcast than typing? Besides, this form of official live broadcast is not very promising. If there is no supernatural power, the live broadcast equipment will fail every minute. Then the author's writing is not very spiritual, and the scene he wants to portray cannot be described, but it will make people feel weak.

It looks good in the front, but it becomes more and more boring in the back.

In the early stage, the protagonist appeared and there were not many supporting characters, so I solved it early in the morning. Moreover, at the critical moment, the protagonist loses his temper! Forget it once, it will happen every time! Forget about filling the cup, it's all done with the exaggerated reaction of the supporting character every time. Don't you think it's exaggerated? If you know the information about monsters and monsters but don't tell them clearly, then human life is not life, right? Since a world and characters have been created. Can you please fill it in when you write? While watching it, I always felt that the protagonist was out of tune with the world. Human life has nothing to do with oneself. Almost indifferent attitude!

I don't understand. It's not a matter of grabbing opportunities or territory. Why does the protagonist hide and speak online? Doesn't the protagonist know that this can be checked? There are civilians and soldiers injured and sacrificed all the time. I have also investigated all kinds of ghosts and monsters. I have to tell them on live broadcast before I can tell the solution. He has an immortal body, and he can only sign in when he sees ghosts. He says he wants to develop, but he doesn't take the initiative to do so. Guard the live broadcast room every day. Don't kill anyone! It doesn't show how awesome the protagonist is, right?

Generally

It's a bit poisonous. It portrays the military people as being too ignorant and looking down on China. It makes me feel embarrassed just looking at it.

The protagonist is like a fool. Just reading the first few chapters has clearly exposed his selfish nature. It's so rubbish.

The so-called sign-in is all based on the lives of others. Others are dying on the front line. The protagonist is watching the live broadcast at home to sign in??? It turns out that other people's lives are so cheap.

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