Lingwu Suzun

It's too detailed, and it's all trivial and boring.

Mess

The writing was smooth at the beginning, but when I saw the four emissaries in the secret realm, none of them could defeat anyone. Now the four of them are together, and they say it doesn't matter, I will protect you, and the writing must be well-founded. If you meet one, kill another, that makes sense. First of all, although the protagonist's training is systematic and there is no need to worry about the state, the cultivation process must also be involved. How to strengthen the body, how to stabilize the state, and how to cultivate the mind! I saw that you wrote about the protagonist obtaining Lingwu Jue, but I didn't seem to see you write about the protagonist practicing cultivation! Entering the nine-story tower, when you encounter a crisis, the system will sense it. Give me martial arts skills and a supreme sword. The sword must have a name! In the Nine-Storey Tower, even Emperor Wu was not enough to fight. Why, when he came out, one of the four envoys was beaten to death. This is not fluent. I wrote randomly and added words. In order to reach a million words, there was no plot, no process, and the reader must remember what you wrote before.

There is nothing wrong with it at first glance, but when it comes to entering the nine-storied pagoda, it is really messed up. No matter in terms of realm, skills and weapons, except for the male protagonist's name, the other follow-up towers are completely different. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I gave up decisively. A rating of 7.4 Is high.