I Can Hang up and Cultivate Immortality

The first hundred chapters This is a good book. See the world of cultivation from an ordinary perspective. Hope everything looks better in the future. Currently there are 100 chapters updated. The writing is good. Nor can he be a tengu.

Author, if you keep writing like this, fewer and fewer people will read it. The first 100 chapters were very enjoyable for me, a bookworm of more than ten years, with the writing style and ideas at the top of the rankings. After the 100th chapter, I was just writing randomly. After the 130th chapter, I really couldn't stand it anymore. First, the secret realms written after Chapter 100 are too big, and they are a bit jumpy. One hundred thousand secret realms, then your system is just one of them. The whole story feels a bit like a snake with its head and tail, which is quite awkward. Second, this is the key point. You keep saying that you have to hold on. After 100 chapters, the author, you count the number of times you hang up during practice. You go back and forth on various things, and you don't practice, and you don't hold back even once. You are all doing things for others, all showing off, for dozens of chapters, and then you threaten anyone who comes. Do you have any misunderstanding of the word "low-key"?

The plot is delicate, the conditions are clear, logical, and not cliche. Ninety percent of the articles on the Internet nowadays are brainless and cool articles, with no basic logic, or just the same routine over and over again. This book breaks out of this strange circle. The author works hard to update.

Although the writing style is relatively young, the plot is okay. Please update it online (ง •̀_•́)ง.

The male protagonist is not like a college student who traveled through time. He is like a high school student or a lower junior high school student. He has no social experience at all. The ugly part is that the male protagonist feels very scumbag. It's just too tender as others have said. Look again. If it's still like this, I'll give up.

Beautifully written

Come on, more updates, the setting is very novel and exciting

There is something wrong with the character's outlook on life, and I guess the author himself has the same problem.

It's a good system article. I hope the author will update it more quickly, even though I'm a prostitute.

It's really beautiful,