The Tale of the Wood Immortal

The setting of Golden Finger is very good, but the heroine is too holy, and the writing is a bit jerky, suitable for primary school students. I only read this kind of thing when I was in elementary school. The author... The holy lady is really not good to read.

I am speechless, the heroine is really a saint. I didn't know anything, I relied on Xiaobai to remind me, so what else could I say to laugh at her? If not, who would I be laughing at? Later, I didn't have any brains and didn't do it well. I blamed Xiaobai. Where was my brain? It all depends on Goldfinger. The heroine wouldn't survive ten chapters if she didn't have a mobile phone. She needs a golden finger to remind her of everything. Is she still a heroine? This kind of photo is really infuriating, I don't know how I kept looking at it for so long. Why write the heroine so stupid? The heroine still wants to make a quibble. She is opening the door to her mother! In capital letters, I am speechless😑

Family members, stay safe! (I don't mean to accuse or insult you. I am just expressing my opinions. The words may be a bit intense. I hope you understand!) It's really unique for a fairy tale to make the heroine look so mentally retarded! The heroine has no brains and doesn't say anything. She really doesn't understand a little bit about human nature and sophistication. It's incredible to be a virgin! I'm just curious about the author's thinking when writing the article. She knows that she just took the Blood Bone Tree in the misty forest, and those monsters must be chased. If you can't defeat them yourself, you still don't run away. Why worry about other people? If you are worried about other people, just scare them away! If you don't talk about those you don't know, your master can always send a messenger to come over and help! Hey, the heroine is good, she just stands outside and waits, watching without asking for help or running away! Also, they were all robbed, and you already wanted to kill the robbers, but you were soft-hearted and let them go. Then who will be taught a lesson if you don't get a lesson, and who will get hurt if you don't get hurt! What's even more speechless is that if you know that you will be in trouble with that guy named Murong, then you can just refuse it forcefully! Your careless refusal will get you into trouble! There is also someone like Murong, who politely asks you to order, but the hostess is so incomprehensible. She clears up the rules and orders not only your own food, but also food for your spiritual pet. Just order it, and she politely tells you that if it is not enough, you can order more. The hostess is even more fierce this time. It's so bad. I just want to order another dish of all kinds. If you say you are familiar with the person or they owe you something, it doesn't matter. The point is that you are not familiar with the person and they don't owe you anything. Moreover, the food is so expensive. Are we really not understanding the world at all? Also, when the heroine was practicing Qi and building foundations, she was not very impressive, but she always wanted to save people, and she always gave selflessly, giving to this and that! Also, the heroine of this article is really the most unmotivated heroine among all the novels I have read (I am a big fan of immortality novels and have read a lot of immortality novels. She must be 80 if not 100!). She really just goes with the flow, takes her time, and after others have worked hard to cultivate, she is always worried about why she is practicing so slowly when everyone praises others!

It was fine in Yue Tian Continent, the heroine was improving little by little, her character was good, and the plot was exciting. After arriving in the spirit world, I felt that all kinds of things were coming one after another, which made my head a little confused. Moreover, the spirit world should be very big, and each family should also be very big, but I didn't feel that it was big. Like a small family, I hope there are people who are equally amazing and powerful. Others are a bit dull. Things are too complicated later on, and I feel that there are not many good people. Generally speaking, the heroine design is okay, no cp praise, and the plot is quite exciting.

The heroine plays a great virgin but a good guy. She either lets the robbers get away with her or suffers losses, or she gets careless and gets injured in the battle. She relies on the props given by her master to save her life. She goes out to experience and is not smart enough to watch anymore. 886

After reading more than thirty chapters, the heroine went out for training for the first time. When she rescued people, she directly gave out fifth-grade elixirs without accepting spiritual stones. This was a bit too kind and she slipped away.

After reading Chapter 122, I feel that many places are not detailed enough. The heroine's mother has always been in the family. Should she strive to become a person favored by the family to make her mother's life better, instead of getting further and further away from the family? The heroine should not have a laissez-faire attitude and let the heroine's younger brother lick the dog Yang Yuwei. During the experience, she knew the relationship between the Shangguan family and the demon clan. , There are elders in the Luo family who practice magic skills, you should tell them, tell it to local snakes and pirates, they have heard with their own ears that the Luo family's deity covets the heroine's single wooden spirit body as a cauldron, and I can't deal with it myself, why don't you tell the big story about the Luo family's practice of magic skills, and kill people with a borrowed knife? The author has written whatever he thought of, the text is not mature enough, come on.

After watching it all, I really wanted to give up several times in the middle. It was all supported by the big plot. Many big scenes were covered in a few strokes. The heroine either forgot this or forgot that. The heroine often behaved in a subdued manner. The ending was also very sudden. Many pitfalls were not filled in carefully. The female partners around the heroine of Yue Tianjie are all love-minded, pursuing rigorous logic, and those with better writing skills may not be able to persist.

In a novel about cultivating immortals, you must be decisive in killing. The heroine, the Holy Mother, even robbed her and still let her go.

It's all narration, and from the age of five to fourteen, I have been talking about the feud between my sister from the outside and her good father. Every time I say that I am disappointed, but there will be a next time, I still say that I long for my father's love, and then I narrate again and again... It's all narration, talking to myself.