Doomsday Ice Phoenix

The protagonist's personality is erratic, but his younger brother, the Holy Mother, refuses to let him change. He knows that problems will arise if he doesn't solve them, but he insists on agreeing to it. He already has a team, and if he still does something like this, his three years in the apocalypse can only be said to have been in vain.

The plot is great! The writing style is also very good, but after the characters awaken their powers, they have too few skills, and it feels like they are lacking in combat. But it's still a good apocalyptic book!

I really don't know what the author was thinking and what he wrote? The heroine's brother is written as a holy mother, and then there is Qi Xi's death. The heroine doesn't feel guilty at all. You can just bring that little brat to hold him back, and you run back to save him, and then Qi Xi's death doesn't matter, right? What do you think, author? What kind of rubbish did you write? There are also many places that simply don't make sense. Why did you leave your brother at the base, you went out, and then your brother was kidnapped? What the hell are you writing about?

It can be said that this is the second worst novel I have ever read in the history of Qimao. The first novel is even more outrageous and speechless.

What does this book say? It was pretty good at the beginning. Because this is originally a novel about a reborn heroine. But there is a little deviation later on. Although the plot still revolves around the heroine, the characteristics of the heroine are not shown, and it is more biased towards the one named Suzhi who takes the dominant position. This feels a little bit off the plot.

The plot is a bit messy, and the ideas in some places are indeed okay, but some considerations are indeed not very comprehensive. The words used are also often repeated. There are a lot of things that need to be written, and some of them are a bit long-winded. Some of the writing is also rather blunt. After all, it is the first time for the author to write. The above are just some suggestions. I hope the author can correct his shortcomings and write better works. (ง •̀_•́)ง

I can't stand Chapter 32 anymore. It's too confusing. The writing is terrible.

It's really not good-looking. Many people have said this about my brother and the Holy Mother, so I won't talk about it. When the heroine leaves the base and sees mutated animals, it feels like it was written by the author on a whim. There was no sign at all in the early stage, and suddenly the setting of this mutated animal becoming extremely powerful appears. The author has to see if it makes sense. It is said that he has never left the previous base in his previous life, only the previous one. There are zombies on earth (do you believe me if I tell you?) Didn't people with mutated pets come to the base in the past life? Or is the information in your base so backward that you didn't know about the things that appeared in the last three months in three months? It's really 666. So did you protect that green tea sister in the past three years? In the last three years of the apocalypse, I didn't kill anyone when I needed to be ruthless. I didn't cut the bad guy's neck with a knife. I started talking about other weaklings, right? They were all created by the author. This is the first time I've seen a character created by myself. Anyway, avoid lightning! ! ! It was really painful to read. This is my first long review on Qimao, and it is also the first book I abandoned before I read fifty chapters.

Nice

Really beautiful Shen Longchen and Yan Qiang are so sweet