Quick Travel: Conquer the White Moonlight

- Luo Sheng × Jun Jue - There are only four small worlds in total. But each world is very sweet. I like it very much. The ending is okay. It also has an explanation. It would be better if there is a sequel. - I just feel like I haven't seen enough. It would be nice if there were more worlds. There is also no small world like the Vampire Blood Hunt in the introduction. What a pity. - No misunderstanding. No bullshit. Those who like short stories can join

Strong Female, I felt quite comfortable reading it. I liked the paranoid character of the male protagonist. I felt a little imperfect about the identities and backgrounds of the male and female protagonists. Overall, it was a good read.

Why are there always things between the male and female protagonists that are incomprehensible? Why do the male protagonists always fall in love with the female protagonist after meeting them once, and then they have no relationship at all, so they become naturally ambiguous? I really don't understand it. It's okay to fall in love at first sight. , But you have to have a process in the middle. This plot is too bland. The whole story is about a love story without any sense of ups and downs. You can already tell the ending after reading the beginning. In the middle, the male and female protagonists are all showing off to others. How sweet, handsome and beautiful they are is outrageous.

Double strength. After the identification, the male protagonist definitely belongs to the atypical Bai Yueguang, just... The moon filled with black sesame... Moon cake? Hmm... After all, the whole process is a long-planned plan, you can see~

I feel like the author wants to write that the heroine is stronger and there are people to support her, but she doesn't know the right balance. When the heroine should be strong, for example, someone has scolded her in the face, it becomes a big deal and a trivial matter. Anyway, I personally feel happy, frustrated, refreshed, and frustrated. Since the author didn't state that this article is a good article, there should still be a little bit of logic. I, who read it without thinking, grinned. Not everyone can eat this bowl of rice. All in all, the author should improve his writing style and be careful.

I don't know how to score 8 out of 9.5, Which is reasonable. I'm sorry. I've been reading fast-travel stories since high school. As a loyal fan of fast-travel stories for more than eight years, I gave up after reading the first article. The heroine has a very novel setting with her own supernatural powers. But what are you writing? The plot of scolding her is written in detail, and further and further, it is all about why the male protagonist is crazy. Did you completely forget about the main task of slapping her in the face? It was covered in just a few strokes. It is also very baffling to focus on criticizing the male protagonist for being crazy. The title at the beginning is written by a cold senior, and he turned into a yandere and crazy criticizing, so he went astray, right?

You can go directly to Chapter 29 of the first world. The heroine was given the role of a big heroine and she severed ties with her family of origin. In chapter 29, someone called her and asked her to come over for dinner. The family called the heroine over to take advantage of the hero's reputation. The heroine didn't say a word and let people take advantage of her. I don't know what I was thinking, rubbish.

It was pretty good, but the ending felt a little rushed.

It's good to watch, but it's a pity that there are no extras

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