Mai Great Fortune Teller

So pretty

It's a pity that not many people read such a good book.

This is a book I read a few years ago. The first part was very exciting, but I didn't finish it. The second part was not that good. One thing was always written over and over again. In the end, the hero's wife was not written at all. It was unfinished.

It's so frustrating to watch. The male protagonist is used like a gun by others. He has no temper at all. The winning hook is not a good thing. He calls the male protagonist a dog every day. It's really not a thing.

Big cheers for the author! ! I think I really like this novel and it's very interesting. I recommend everyone to read it.

The plot is very bloody, but there are typos. It would be better if it was changed.

It's beautiful, I can't finish it quickly, I can't wait.

The plot is wonderful and the writing is brilliant. It is a rare book.

The writing is not bad, but I like to repeat the development of things and the status of characters too much. Just to make up the word count, I often repeat it three or five times. There are also contextual contradictions. There cannot be anything that cannot be done in the above article. It can be done after writing a few hundred words. Repetition and contradiction are the biggest failures.

I feel like there should be more female leads in the future. If you didn't say you were getting married, I thought that the novice would be your wife.