Reborn in the Roaring ’90s

The more you look at it, the more pathetic it becomes. If you have any backbone, please don't fall for this, for the sake of your phone!

This book has lost its appeal. If you're going to write about business, then write about the wisdom within business, not criticism. And now you're writing about organized crime? What era are you writing about? Was it really that corrupt?

The protagonist has no dignity at all

This is nonsense. With so much money already, why are you still doing this? It's utter rubbish.

The plot is disjointed, filled with irrelevant details that leave the reader confused. The pacing is snail-paced, offering little substance. There's nothing particularly interesting about it.