Dang Song

This book can be said to be a masterpiece. The pace of the whole book is relatively slow, which can be said to be a breath of fresh air in today's generally fast-paced online writing environment. The plot of the story is well grasped, and the ups and downs are described in detail. There are many places in the book that are thought-provoking and beneficial. Come on, author, such a good book cannot be buried in this vast sea of ​​books.

You write about someone else's dog tooth, and as a time traveler, his life is worse than useless. There is no blood, just a mutated power, the mother-in-law was bullied into thinking. He was beaten directly and then framed. He knew clearly that he was related to someone, and if he went to jail, he would die. He went in obediently, but once he got in he started pretending to be B again. No matter what you pretend to be, even if you are a dragon, you have to pretend to be there. Just solve all those damn things secretly and be done with it, since he doesn't have cameras. After finishing the work, just take your family and change places to hide your name or go up the mountain to become the king. Spicy chicken

There is too much text, so I don't recommend getting into it. I keep talking about trivial things and the number of words. The author is just thinking about it, but I can't understand what he is going to write.

The plot is slow and procrastinating. It's fifty or sixty chapters in, and it's still ink in a deserted village. Personally, I don't like the slow pace, so bad review!

The writing is good, but I update one page every day, so I have to leave a negative review.

If you can give up, give up. Each chapter of Mother-in-Law is very detailed. The main plot advances very slowly. The routine is similar to other time-travel novels. But this one is not fun and not funny. I don't know why you recommend it to me.

If you really can't continue writing anymore, just finish it. The rest of it is a bit subpar.

A beggar is gifted with supernatural powers, why don't you bring a system?

Only state officials can set fires and the people cannot light lamps. I teach others to take advantage of natural disasters to make money. It is a bit unethical, but there is no way. The protagonist can talk about this and there are many poisonous points. Just watch it if you can bear it.

There are too many typos and the sentence is not fluent. Reading experience is very poor