When Did the Dog I Raised Become Invincible?

In fact, when I read the reviews at first, I thought this book was not good to read, but when I actually read it, I realized that was not the case. This is different from other novels. People grow up step by step after time travel. He directly becomes a boss and an invincible existence in the world. It feels quite novel. Anyway, in a word, it is very good to read.

Very exciting. However, the ending is still somewhat unclear. Zhang Daoling, Huang Feihu, and Zhang Xuan are all from Earth? How could it be the Ancestor Hongyun? Even if Zhang Daoling came earlier than him according to what Zhang Daoling said, what happened to the protagonist's memory of his own earth? And what's going on with my wife and daughter? What is that dream about marrying a wife and having a daughter?

He looked incomprehensible. Materials like Jiu Xuan Wood are precious in Kyushu, precious in the Immortal Realm, precious in the battlefields of the heavens, precious in the Chaos Battle Realm, and even precious in the thirty-third heaven. Also, many characters in the later period disappeared inexplicably. Why did I write so much in the front? In the back, a bunch of people from the Kyushu Immortal Realm became the old knowing kings, talking about the ghosts of time and space, and so on. It was like a person who had never been to school started to communicate with others in English about how to build an atomic bomb. Not rigorous at all. It feels really sad to see that it needs to be improved.

This book is good to read, but there are a lot of typos

After reading over a hundred chapters, I really can't stand this heroine, it's inexplicable. This is not because the author substituted himself into yy, right? If this Xia He was deleted, this book would definitely be much better.

How can I put it this way? This book belongs to the genre of retarded pretentiousness. The plot goes back and forth just to pretentiousness for the protagonist. The problem is that there are too many repetitive pretentiousness. It is said over and over again that the pretentious plot is too boring. It is nothing more than changing the names of people. When A comes, it is the same routine, when B comes, it is the same routine, and when C comes, it is the same routine. Apart from the different names, there are no novel routines. A routine is used from beginning to end, only the name of the person is changed.

Don't read this cool article with your brain

The first twenty chapters are beautifully written, but the rest are all rambling, nonsense, and random writing. The entire novel is incoherent. It is recommended that the title be changed to "Nonsense and Random Writing" Introduction: The author's Chinese language was taught by his son, just for inheritance!

Reluctantly

The same broken routine is repeated over and over again, the characters are superfluous, and the plot of the characters is so bad that I don't want to read it. I'm afraid this is a book written for those born in 10s.