The Entertainment King

I have finished reading the first few books, and I have read dozens of chapters here in the past few days. As always, there is no nonsense, the writing is smooth, the plot is compact, the story is light and cheerful, and the three-dimensional sense is strong, and the characters are clear and clear. The place names that make people more happy have been improved a lot, and there is no sense of confusion. It should be a masterpiece. Work harder. The unfinished book will have more room for maneuver. I hope the author can create a good ending as much as possible. Beautiful things are always happier. There are a few words in the first few books. If there is more space, I will write more. In this way, I will have more happiness to share. This is just my humble opinion.

I am a man who is so pretentious by you that I have no sense of responsibility at all. You and your ex-girlfriend don't know each other. You gave money to someone and you still don't explain it. Who are you trying to tease? There is no problem in the world when it comes to your ex. What's more, you were bumped into by your girlfriend. You act like you are wronged and don't bother to explain. Even the kings of Arabia are not as good as you. Please learn how to fall in love. If you can't do it, watch more romantic dramas. A man is no longer a man if he loses his responsibilities. Mouse tail juice. If you don't solve the problem in three chapters, you will give a decisive negative review.

To be honest, the first part was pretty good, but I can't stand it anymore after reading chapter 478. I was caught by my girlfriend giving money to my ex-girlfriend, and I didn't explain that I had more than a billion so-called charity money from the system. No wonder my girlfriend misunderstood me. Under such circumstances, you still feel that others don't trust you, broke up with you, and still feel aggrieved? Still a man? Not everyone has to pamper you unconditionally. It's your problem. You still think Lan Xue is acting on a whim? I have been chasing you for so long, been together for four or five years, and then broke up because of you. Are you still being pretentious? I really don't know if there's something wrong with the author's three views or if he's becoming more and more stupid as he writes.

It's a cool article, but I didn't feel happy. Instead, I felt angry after reading it. I wanted to write the male protagonist as if he was worth 25,800,000 yuan. The female protagonist is so obvious, but the male protagonist seems to have offline emotional intelligence, making it impossible for people to watch comfortably.

This protagonist's character is really not flattering! Mature? If it involves the ex, we won't talk about it without explanation. There is a saying that the brothers have settled the score clearly, and it also involves the ex. Without a word of explanation, the heroine will be abandoned. Where is the maturity? He has no sense of responsibility at all. He was in his thirties before time travel, but is he like this after time travel? I don't want to explain or say anything. To put it nicely, it's just to travel and relax. To put it bluntly, it's just to go around and pretend to be B. I also pretend to be aggrieved. I really can't tell where I am aggrieved. It's obviously my own problem! Fortunately, I had the nerve to write about the heroine's thoughts, so that the protagonist dotes on the heroine too much, which leads to this. Where is the favor? Aren't they all gay? Isn't it right to release an album or write a song for your girlfriend, which is what you can do? Besides, the song was copied from a previous life, and I remembered it well, and I still relied on the system! Isn't it normal for the heroine to lose her temper just because of money and her ex? They broke up with just one word of distrust. Is the origin of this couple the character you foreshadowed in the past? You promised not to talk about feelings easily, but you promised to be good to her for the rest of your life if you made the right choice? Firstly, the heroine has not betrayed you, and secondly, as the daughter of a wealthy family, apart from being unable to work in the kitchen, there is not much to choose from in terms of temper or other things, right? Third, the heroine doesn't trust you? There are so many women around you who are so obviously interested in you. The heroine didn't say anything, right? She can ask you to tell these women clearly and reject all ambiguities, right? But she doesn't. Isn't this trust? And I will accompany you from the bottom to the top in the country! No matter how bad other writing is, I won't pick anything, but this is the heroine? Just changed it? I really couldn't stand it and gave it up. I don't recommend it to everyone! I wouldn't believe this good review if it wasn't just a brush!

It felt okay at the beginning, but later on it felt like a running account. Each chapter talked about what song or novel was released, and then added an objective analysis of unknown reasons, and the lyrics also accounted for a large part. Within one or two hundred chapters, the brainless Blue God is awesome and invincible. And doesn't the protagonist deserve a name? I just kept calling blueberry blueberry, and the people around me also called me blueberry. It was too confusing🤣🤣🤣

Don't end it so soon, it just started. Update quickly. Love you author greatly

First, the male protagonist is nothing if he leaves the system. Secondly, the male protagonist was disconnected from his ex. When Lan Xue saw him, he still didn't explain. He just borrowed money and let it go without telling Lan Xue. He blamed Lan Xue for being willful and arbitrary. Thirdly, Lan Xue lowered her body to look for him, and the male protagonist had to put on airs to temper Lan Xue's temperament. In Shuanglan's emotional line, Lan Xue's performance is very humble. The male protagonist has no outstanding performance from beginning to end, and he still feels aggrieved.

Where did the God's two lives as a human being and his still mature soul manifest itself? He doesn't take any responsibility at all. He blames women for not explaining his own fault. It's very artificial. It's not without reason that he abandoned his bad girlfriend in his previous life. When he got tired of playing, he wanted to be a scumbag. He couldn't do it. He had to be a show-off and build a memorial for himself. It's really hard to keep up the word count, can't the two female protagonists do it? Can't three heroines work? If it really doesn't work, how about a harem show? If you really can't do it, can you do sadomasochism? I recommend you go find a girlfriend and then write! What a fucking plot, most idiots wouldn't be like this. A three-year-old kid is playing in the sand. Damn it.

I beg the author to complete the emotional line quickly.