The Arrival of the High-Martial Era

The front is very good, but the back is a bit unworthy, especially the last one. It's hard to describe in words. The subject matter is great, but I am a new author! The logic is not very clear! Even the ancients didn't talk about it! Nothing happened to him, and Zhongmen in other places didn't have anything to do.

I couldn't even tell how old the protagonist was. One day, when he went to college, he was 17 and turned into 15. A year later, he said he had lived for 25 years! It was also said that the Martial Gods would not be able to enter the Blue Star within 20 years. After a while, many Martial Gods who just came in said that they would not be able to enter unless they were above the Martial Gods! It sucked in the end!

The world logic is poor, the writing is good, the setting is good, and the plot is exciting. The protagonist saves the world, but the structure is too small. On the surface, there are no loopholes in the transition of the article, but in fact, the logic does not make sense. It was okay at first, but after thinking about it later, it almost didn't make sense.

Really bad

I feel very average! Of course I didn't finish it! I read the first 45 chapters, and the setting is okay, but it's too bland. I can't pretend to be cool. There's just no highlight to encourage you to read it. It's like playing a single-player game by yourself, upgrade this one, and then go to another place. There are no surprises from it. The writing can only be said to be average. The worldview is a bit new, but that's it, it doesn't go into depth. In terms of setting, whether it's skills or skills, the profound speed data mentioned at the beginning can be mentioned in one sentence, as well as the protagonist's attribute panel. Either don't write it, or be more detailed. Write more and you won't be able to speak the word "water". Very average, even ugly. If it wasn't for the book shortage, I wouldn't have read so many chapters.

What the hell are you writing? I wrote a copy and wrote hundreds of chapters. I'm really good at it.

After a fight with force, he collapsed and fell into a coma. His IQ was zero. He went to sneak attack on the foreign race. He used dozens of chapters to show off his IQ. In the end, he finally defeated a group of people. He was a savior. The single-digit war god could confront the alien three-digit war god for more than ten years. He advanced to the level of war god with pig's feet. The other war gods could die and started his personal show. , It is said that the brain has been replaced by muscles. Needless to say the IQ here, the combat power is a mess. When facing the enemy, the enemy is either scared away or exhausted, and the enemy is exhausted during the escape. He is really a genius. He knows how to speak harsh words all day long. He will kill whoever he wants next time. He kills all the invading aliens and calls them brothers when he turns around.

The expectations are good, but the plot is a bit scattered, the writing style and ideas are not smooth enough, and there are too many details that make it wordy.

I can't stand it anymore, I guess only the author can understand it

The process was okay, but the ending was terrible.