I Revealed My System from the Start, and My Family Helped Me Marry a Wife and Become an Immortal!

Voted! Very cool plot! The writing is fluent and there are relatively few grammatical errors. At least it is not the kind of book written by a semi-literate person.

I finally caught up with the update. I have read other books about many children and many blessings before, but this one is completely different from the previous ones. It is refreshing and dense, but not poisonous. I can't get enough of it. Come on, the author, and update as soon as possible! ! !

It's well written and I'll give you a vote, but I have to leave a negative review so that more people can't see it. This good book cannot be sanctioned.

It's pretty good. I saw other reviews saying that the main character is the Virgin, which is actually not bad. Those who mentioned the Virgin probably only read the first few chapters. The protagonist hasn't grown up at that time. It's normal to worry too much about killing and not be decisive. If you kill indiscriminately without growing up, your combat power will collapse in the later stage and it will be very illogical.

If you dare to write, all the votes must be given to you

Uh... The writing is okay, but is it fun to write a doppelgänger?

Very well written, good luck to the author! !

The writing is also very, very, very, very, very good. Okay. No shortcomings have been found yet. The only drawback is that the updates are too slow, too few, and not enough to watch.

All in all, what should I say? Guan Shan's book. The writing is okay, so those who like beautiful articles can say so. Well, I want that kind of fighting and like passionate battle stories. , It is not recommended to read this book, because this book is mainly about the kind of people who have many children and many blessings. However, the author worked very hard. If the characters were more lifelike, I believe this book would not only have a score of 9.1. Cheers to the original author!

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