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Such a carefree male protagonist, so many beautiful wives, from the moment he betrayed Li Menglan, I didn't want to see him anymore. He could be like that with his master. The key is that the brainless Li Menglan, who was born in the army, would lead his life like that. For a man, a carefree man is not worth it.

Very good, worthy of a 9-point rating. There are not many typos and the most important thing is that it does not affect your reading. Except for the somewhat awkward logic of technological attack methods that need to be weakened for the fighting plot, the flaws are not concealed.

Write something. This protagonist is like a fool

The logic is self-consistent, the emotions are sincere, and it is comfortable to watch.

Really, what the hell is this? As long as there is a girl, she must like the male protagonist. The plot is generally too watery and lacks details. The author should try to enrich the details.

Actually, it started well, but the rest was just so-so.

In terms of plot and rhythm, the game is pretty good from the beginning to the middle game. Don't be verbose, and don't lose your wits. But the stallion's three views are incorrect. It can be scored as 9 points in the middle and early stages. It was too frustrating in the later stages. The Sirian invasion was written as too childish. Logically there is no way to explain that a counterattack can occur on Earth. It's too far-fetched for the male protagonist to kidnap an enemy commander. If it were changed to a single female protagonist, and if the direction of the underground world city remained unchanged after the city grew, this story would be quite good. Pity!

Li Menglan is a failure. I can't stand watching dozens of pictures.

It's very good. I haven't given up the idea of ​​reading it after reading it. It mixes many genres, but it can only be a novel.

The rating is high, but the writing is too poor.