Journey to the West: The Treasure Vase of the Great Dao

It gets more and more messy as we get to the back, and the Western world is coming. Baffling

Personally I think it looks good

The author has not carefully understood Journey to the West, the Thirty-Six Methods of Tiangang, and the Seventy-six Methods of Disha. Many of the learned spells have been learned twice! It's uncomfortable to watch

It's too ordinary, the writing is messy and the plot is too bland.

At first glance, I thought he was an ordinary protagonist, but upon further inspection, I realized he was the tea sage, the tea fairy Lu Yu. What a great foreshadowing by the author.

The writing is pretty good, but have you ever thought about what to do if you are a detached person? Didn't the protagonist start like this too? You can't just flip the table over when you get the meat, right?

It looks like an NPC and is not interesting.

Didn't you even read it after you finished writing it? The setting is meaningless, the plot is confusing, and more than half of the 80-odd chapters have nothing to do with the protagonist, and the plot has no logic and appeal, and it's not even interesting. What do you think readers should read, chanting sutras?

A group of people with poor realm and fighting ability. The authors who work part-time didn't put much effort into writing. Most of them just messed up the word count.

It's very beautiful. It's true that it's plain and simple. It's very beautiful.