A Little Immortal Farmer's Leisurely Farm Life

The plot is quite funny, and the story with Du Xiaoshuang is great. It has a bit of a bickering couple feel to it. Erdan is also a goofball, and the rural life feels very realistic. Keep up the good work, author!

Not bad! ✍😁👌

Your book has too many typos and repeated sentences.

Either establish a completely new worldview, or be more realistic.

The article is excellent, making readers want to keep reading. The writing style is very good, and the logic is strong! Highly recommended.

Indecisive, so indecisive. The conditioning is not clear enough Why not use spiritual liquid for cultivation? Why not utilize array formations? It's okay if they bully you.

Everyone, let's leave. This novel has nothing to do with reality. Enterprises in the county pay hundreds of billions in taxes every year. He completely misuses his abilities. His family doesn't suspect anything. The rural neighbors only come to him because his father's leg is healed and his elderly relative is dying. They give him 20,000 yuan as soon as he's cured. This isn't the countryside. A mere cultivator at the second level of Qi Refining can ripen grapes, watermelons, and cucumbers with ease. Can't someone at the Foundation Establishment stage go to heaven?

This is so drawn-out and tedious. It's about a tree spirit inheritance, college students, and acting like a village official is his father. Why don't you just write about the 1980s?

The protagonist is too arrogant, so arrogant that even the most insignificant people can mess with him, even implicating his parents. He even gets hurt by the weak. It's ridiculous.

It looks great and I'd recommend it.