What Happened If I Hit You Quickly?

I'm here to add it! I mainly want to complain about the overall structure of this book. The beginning of many small worlds is connected with the end of the previous world, which is placed in one chapter. This makes people very irritated! The overall look and feel is that it has no beginning and no end, and I hope it can be improved. Overall, it's still okay, the flaws don't hide the advantages!

What is the situation in the last plane (゜ロ゜), please tell me /￣￣＼ ＜´･＼…? | ３）＼ ＜･ ＼ ＼＿＿／∪_∪ ) ＵＵ

It's very beautiful, but something seems weird, the words are wrong, eh, please come on, author.

Mommy! ! ! Fragrant rice rice! ! ! So delicious! ! ! Boom boom mommy! ! ! Come on, have some more fragrant rice, hehehe🤤🤤🤤

As long as the author can make the sentences smoother, make fewer typos, don't mix up the titles, and don't change people's names randomly, this book will definitely be an above-average fast-travel novel. If the author can finish those stories that have no beginning and end, and stories that have been cut off by you, this will be a good book. The story is very exciting, and the setting is also brilliant, but it's a pity that it's dragged down by your lackluster writing style.

I don't know what it's about, I can't understand the plot, and I have no desire to continue reading.

Haha, no cp

It's really good-looking, and the writing is okay, but there are just a lot of typos. There are some planes where you can fall in love, and some planes where you can't fall in love. Some stories are very complicated, and there are some stories that you just can't stand. For example, there is a harem story, but it seems a little outrageous. I suggest you skip these. After all, we read novels for happiness and to relax ourselves.

I admire myself for being able to watch for such a long time.

It's pretty good-looking, but it feels like something is missing. It's weird.