Overbearing Daddy Dotes on and Teases

The article is well written, the story between the male and female protagonists has a clear idea, the plot is exciting, and the characters have distinct personalities. The child Tang Yuchen is very cute in the author's writing. I hope the author will continue his efforts and keep updating! ! !

The author made some typos when writing, but this does not affect the author's writing style and the wonderful plot. Although the beginning of the plot is cliche, the middle content is vivid. I hope the author can write it quickly. I don't want the author to stay up late every day, but I hope the author can finish this novel as soon as possible. This novel can be said to be the first novel I have read seriously in my history. The green tea is endless. I hope the ending is he, but I don't want the ending to be be.

Very well written but too slow

I want to say, did the author live in ancient times? Didn't you know that DNA has this function? A stranger can tell at a glance that the child belongs to the male protagonist. The male and female protagonists are written so stupidly that they don't know how to take a paternity test. Also, the male protagonist has a low IQ and was dumped by Su Bailian. He didn't even check what happened five years ago. He just relied on a watch and determined that Su Bailian was the person from one night five years ago. The female protagonist also has low IQ and is a bit weak. It's annoying to read. After more than a hundred chapters, she still doesn't know who her son's biological father is and abandoned her.

It's well written, but I don't like waiting. The updates are slow and I'm not interested in reading them anymore.

The whole text is just a matter of words. In those two sentences, when Song Shan appears, she either looks for trouble or slanders the female protagonist. Is the male protagonist brainless? Is the help just for the taking? With so much power, is it not easy to get some information? ? ? I'm done with this guy... It's nothing. Let's break up the meeting.

It's good to watch, the plot is exciting, and the writing is brilliant. I want to watch it all in one go. Can I update a few more episodes every day?

The emotional lines between the male and female characters are even more exciting! ! ! !

Book. You can write.

It's a book I've been following for a long time. It's quite good, but it just kept getting further and further away. I didn't even remember who the protagonist was after reading the finale 😂, but it's very sweet and interesting. No matter who the couple is, I sincerely wish them happiness!