Mr. Si's Sweet Wife Is Doted On

It's pretty good. The heroine's emotional intelligence is a bit low. There are indeed a lot of scenes between the male and the second daughter, but I like to watch them.

It's too slow. Can it be published faster?

It looks good, the plot is exciting, and the sentences are fluent. It would be better if you watch the ending.

How can I put it, some things are not explained clearly, many places are written in the front and forgotten in the back, and the male protagonist's role is really small. From the beginning to the end, I don't see how good he is. He only appears to have some emotional scenes with the heroine. The character creation is also inconsistent. The villain's hostility towards the protagonist is always inexplicable, but it is vigorous. The writing style really needs to be strengthened. The world view is huge, but it is not written out.

The title "Si Shao Sweet Wife Dotes" does not fit with the text. Si Shao appears too little and is completely useless. The female protagonist will only passively fight back. Any male and female supporting roles are much more exciting than the male protagonist. What is the point? Author, you are totally sorry for the title.

Hope it can be updated soon, I like this book very much

Finally found the sadistic novel I wanted to read The male protagonist is handsome and gentle, and the female protagonist also hides her secrets... If you like domineering and gentle, I hope you can check it out

It's pretty good, not too much, it's my favorite dish

The plot is good. Readers, please read Perfumer

The writing is really bad, the plot drags out and I don't understand what it is about, I really can't stand it.