An Ordinary Cultivator’s Path to Immortality

The main characters noted earlier are Xu Yi and He Lin. Needless to say, Xu Yi is the male lead, but who is the main character in He Lin? He first came out to introduce Xu Yi into the Xuanyuan Sect, and then he was wrongfully accused of stealing a high-grade magic weapon, the ruler crane pen, and was expelled from the sect. Later, he basically had no role in the sect. It took a long time for him to appear and became an evil cultivator in the Nianhe period, but Xu Yi still used his wisdom to kill him. Why did the book review list him as the main character? Why is there no female protagonist? I think the scenes of people like Ning Ruoxi, Beichen Mengdie, or Little Hulu Xu Wangshu are quite interesting. Why are they not considered the main characters?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, it was very dull. If you look into it carefully, there are still many unreasonable things. For example, the little girl from the Xianyin Sect that you met in the first mission was not practicing at that time and was equivalent to a mortal. The man in black who was chasing him was already a high-level person in the Qi training stage. He ran in front of the protagonist and just caught up with her. Although it is unreasonable, I understand that it is necessary for the plot. Yes, but after rescuing people later, the elders came and left with the little girl without saying a word. This was very unreasonable. Without asking why he was killed by the man in black, where he came from, or expressing his gratitude, it was okay to talk about it if there was something urgent. It can also be said here for the sake of the subsequent plot. Then, when he arrived at the secret realm of Southern Cold, what should I say here, he wrote about all kinds of hardships and being hunted down. Comparing it to the forbidden area of ​​the Qi training period in the Mortal Cultivation Legend, Han Li assessed the situation and was cautious, but in this book, it is difficult to survive, and he is almost alive, like a wanted criminal. , He was chased by all kinds of people when he met him. Wan San saw that the protagonist's pseudo-spiritual cultivation was high and he knew there was a chance. This was another loophole. The elders and senior brothers in the same sect didn't know so many things. Wan San could see it at a glance. To put it badly, it meant that all the members of the sect were being outwitted. To put it nicely, it was a loophole. In short, after seeing the secret realm, I will give it an average rating. I can't stand it anymore.

Good

Let's talk about what I just saw. A 7th level Qi practitioner chased a child but failed to catch up. It makes sense. The man in black should have wanted to kill the child. It would be easy for a cultivator to kill a mortal, let alone a child.

Not bad, I can still watch it later

What the hell is the writing style like? I've been making up words all the time. I've written more than ten chapters about a secret realm. Still talking about medicinal herbs and shakusuru. The male protagonist has a golden finger and can surpass other people in realms. He's also been talking about foundation building. He's been making up words. Bad writing.

The protagonist is so useless, I feel as useless as the author!

It's really well written, but the updates are slow, and some of them stop reading halfway through. It would be nice if there were more updates! My personal opinion is more updated, thank you author

This is a real mortal cultivating immortality. There are not so many shortcuts. They all came through it hard one step at a time. Have you seen too many? Cultivation to a very high level without any effort, surpassing most Man, is it really that easy? The more I look at the back, the more I feel his The levels are getting higher and higher. The end is both the ending and the beginning

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