Three Years at the Forge, Then I Emerged as a Martial Arts God

There is a lot of self-talk, a lot of brainstorming, and a lot of explanations, so the plot advances very slowly. To be honest, I admire this type of author. They can write several chapters, or even dozens of chapters, about a little thing, and then the main plot is pushed a little bit.

This is based on Tao Ye Wants to Ascend, but the writing style is a bit bland.

After listening to 100 chapters, don't talk too much nonsense.

It feels good, but there is a lot of nonsense. It would be better to write less nonsense.

There are more and more typos in the back, and even the name of the protagonist can be spelled incorrectly. I can barely read the first 300 pictures. Later, the protagonist takes care of his senior brother like a nanny. His senior brother caused a lot of trouble, and it was the protagonist who wiped his ass. The key is that the protagonist is not a top-notch existence at this stage, and has been wiping the butts of others and working as a nanny. The author wanted to write the protagonist's character of repaying kindness, but he wrote it in the wrong direction. This is not repaying a favor, the protagonist has done enough to be his senior brother's father. You can read the first 300 pictures to pass the time, but I don't recommend reading the rest, they're too extroverted.

The writing is a bit procrastinating and the pace is a bit slow.

When I saw Chapter 177, I skipped about a dozen chapters. The shortcoming is that the author's writing is a bit procrastinating. It would be acceptable to write faster and change the map more.