The First Martial Spirit in Eternity

I think it's still pretty good-looking, although there are a lot of mistakes, it's too single, it always kills people, and it's too fake.

What nonsense is too rubbish, a piece of shit, it doesn't make any sense, I don't have the strength to tell you, why don't you give it back to him, mom, she likes to pretend, she doesn't understand anything! Not to mention that you are not related to Ziyu and you have good intentions in helping him. You only have a martial spirit and you think you are giving it to her selflessly. You forcefully open the martial spirit to her in advance. Can't you wait a few months? Without your martial spirit, wouldn't you be nothing more than a useless creature? No matter how much I write in the future, this book will be rubbish. There is no need to waste time reading it.

The realm of some characters has always been wrong, and the categories are too single.

It looks and feels good.

It started off brilliantly and was well written, although there was a lot of misinformation, it was too monotonous, it was always a massacre, and it was too unrealistic. Some character realms are prone to errors and their categories are too single. The author has unique insights and views on fantasy novels, and explains time and space, life and death, yin and yang. From a personal point of view, I think it is a novel worth reading (ღ♡‿♡ღ)

The author has his own understanding of fantasy, and he has thoughts and ideas. He does not just write for the sake of pleasure. He explains time, space, yin and yang, life and death... All of them, which is worth reading.

It's not pretty, the protagonist is vomiting blood from beginning to end.

The male protagonist is too cowardly and not decisive in killing.

It's not good. The plot is too ridiculous.

Too bad