The Immortal Doctor King

Good.

There are too many typos in the front, but the back is so exciting, and the overall feeling is pretty good👍

It's a good thing. I finished it after watching it for a week.

I have already evaluated it, but I don't want to comment. The worst thing is that a cultivator cannot beat modern martial arts. Remember, the article is about modern martial arts. Even if it is inherited, he cannot be a martial arts passed down from cultivating immortals. Again, the author may not know the inner strength of martial arts and the aura and true essence of the immortal cultivation system! I forgot to mention it, as I commented before, martial arts should be based on the innate, that is, the internal force during the acquired period. The innate is the true energy, and the innate is the true energy and spiritual energy.

Speed ​​up the update. It's perfect.

At first, an elder of a third-grade sect was only a first-grade Xuren, and then a servant of a fourth-grade family was a second-grade Xuren. Did you write this through your brain?

The chapters are exciting and leave suspense, which gives people the motivation to continue watching, but the updates are too slow.

The protagonist is a weakling, a stallion, one after another, after chapter 646, all the loyal friends are dead, why don't you die, fuck me

Generally, it is a cliched copy, with a broken family and poverty as the main character. The main characters also include the second generation of rich people, the second generation of officials, top families, and underworld groups. Antiques, stone gambling, fighting, sets after sets, all the same.

If the author doesn't want to continue editing, then don't write it. It will harm others and himself.