One Piece: Starting by Rejecting the Red-Haired Emperor's Invitation

It's not bad. I think it's good that Enel appears again. His personality has changed a little, but I don't think it's a big problem. This article follows the classic comedy routine. Lin Mo is "unhappy" and there is always a "brainless" around him, which makes up for the lack of plot. If you keep signing in, the plot does need to be improved, but the plot after Lin Mo discovers that he is 15 years old and going to the amusement park is a small change in Lin Mo's character, a twist, including accepting the crew. All in all, I'm looking forward to Lin Mo's next story. The writing is smooth, and as for the plot, I hope the author will think about it and improve it. The above is purely my personal opinion, please don't comment.

This article is a re-creation of "One Piece". It can be seen that the author has put real effort into adapting the plot. Without a solid understanding of the plot of "One Piece" for many years, it is really difficult to write such a novel. However, there are also some shortcomings in the plot. I hope the author will work harder to improve it in the future. The character design of the protagonist is also very unique, with Lin Mo as the protagonist. I can't say that my IQ is off the charts, but I can insist on not being disturbed by all kinds of temptations. I like to drink a lot, but I never miss anything. I hope the author will work harder to improve the plot in the future. Also, if you update the author, I will like it. If it is well written, I will like it + vote + reward (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on Dear readers, if you like my comment, you can leave a like and give it a thumbs up. I would like to thank you all in advance! If you don't like it, don't complain, thank you! ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

The article is great. I thought it was following the route of One Piece at first, but after he added himself, the content of the story changed. It made me see a new "One Piece" that is really good to watch. It is very difficult to add another person to the original story line and change it. The description of the characters is very vivid. Don't miss it if you like "One Piece"

Nice

This book is really good. Both Lin Mo and his crew are very interesting and creative. I like it very much, but I feel sad that I can't read it here. But I still hope everyone will read this book.

It's not, it's not, it's not, it's not, it's very good-looking. I used to be blind, but I actually thought this was not good-looking. I made a mistake. I'm sorry, the author is great~

I am arguing about the CP between Lin Mumu and Saab, I hope the author will not break it up

It looks good, but updates are a bit slow.

Blindly signing in, being a slave to the system, the plot is lackluster, and it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. It belongs to the bad street. If you have time to waste here, it is better to read the original work.

The author doesn't have to work too hard, just 100 million chapters a day is enough