God Level Card System

I finally finished reading it. The writing is very good. The author just needs to pay more attention to it. He said that Yun Yi's talent is far superior to others, but why are all his friends higher in cultivation than him? Yes, Yun Yi has less time to practice, but he has been in the Cloud Realm for so long. The spiritual power of the Cloud Realm is more dense than that of the Pig Immortal City. Why does the cultivation level still increase so slowly? Also, when the finale is approaching, the author is too anxious to write in big letters, and everything is not fluent. Nothing is explained clearly. The extra chapter is also a mess. How can I put it? The whole article is very good and very interesting. Good reviews.

It's just that the ending is a bit messy

It's a very ordinary book, with the same old routine, a scumbag who thinks he is a stallion, relies entirely on luck, and has absolutely no strength. The strength is never higher than that of the enemy, but he always relies on luck to win. In the end, he is ridiculously lucky. The so-called rank is not lucky enough, so the book becomes very boring from the middle stage onwards, and I just casually turn to the ending. Not recommended for old bookworms.

You can persuade people to leave at the beginning. The maid made an appointment with you to meet at the lake, but in the end you went to hang out with them without even thinking about it. The saint was even more awesome. When her physique was breaking out, she went out of her way to find a public place to soak half-naked in the lake. This was because others didn't have the chance to have sex with her, and everyone who saw it was stupid.

GOOD

The plot in the last few chapters is like rushing for the college entrance examination...

So damn pretty

The plot is actually very ordinary, but the writing is just a little better. L(Compared to others)But I still hope that you would write about his former role as a thief and write it into a book. To be honest, he wrote this book as a thief. As the main character of this book, I didn't feel good about it. The emotional line is also very speechless. There are a bunch of women nearby. That's it.

Watching it for the second time! It's really nice, but there are a lot of typos

Hot chicken, sentimental, bad ending, bad thinking, the plot is too cliche