The Forbidden Land of the Silk Road

This article is rated as: good, mainly based on the following points: First, this article has a profound description of the characters and their inner feelings. The changes in thinking of different characters in different periods, the relationship between father and son, and the relationship between friends are all delicately depicted. Second, the protagonist is an ordinary person, not smart and useless, a low-level figure in society. But it was such a scumbag who, relying on his persistent pursuit of the true nature of things and his persistence in never abandoning his friends, managed to survive a narrow escape to the end. A very good inspirational story. The language is simple and smooth, with few grammatical and text errors. Of course, there are also some shortcomings. The so-called "big events" that run through the whole text only have origins and lack of endings, which makes it feel like the beginning and the end. The article pursues horror too much, and some plots come and go abruptly and have no connection with the context. They are just to heighten the tense atmosphere and create horror. I think one or two plots are okay, but if there are too many, the traces will be too obvious. In addition, the plot arrangement of horror-themed works should not be shocking to the end. It should be unfolded slowly and summed up appropriately in stages, otherwise you will feel tired after reading it. Personally recommend, this article is worth reading.

I really like the author's mentality. After thousands of sails, he always sticks to his heart. Living an ordinary life and living calmly is a down-to-earth life.

Not bad, well written

It's quite beautiful. The first part made me suffocate, and the second part made me cry.