I'm Heartbroken for Nie Chen

I originally thought it looked good, but the heroine was too torturous.

The article is short, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not as direct and passionate as in other articles. It has a long-flowing feeling, which makes reading the article more comfortable.

The writing is very good, but the layout is too small, the heroine's character setting is also very contradictory, and the plot reasoning has too many flaws. But among the 99% of time travel novels that are bad, this novel has a very good idea. Recommended and I hope the author will work hard

The heroine's character is not good at all

Well, in fact, the plot is generally good. Given a few clues, you can basically guess the cause and effect. The most important thing is the emotional line, plus a little bit of the heroine's mother's heart. /There are quite a few typos in the later period. Also, I feel that the character image of the male protagonist in the later period is not established. There are some mood swings in the early stage, and in the later stage, he feels a bit like a wooden person (no emotion) /The following is a bit of a cramming of words (I skipped through the descriptions of Mr. Sun in the Cabinet and the Emperor in the Palace) Alas, what I didn't expect was that Mu Yao's parents actually... (I won't spoil this, just watch it yourself🌚) It was a pity for Mu Yi. Although she had done nothing wrong, she could only stay at the border with her lover in the end. And Ayun, he was just a child. I thought he could enjoy the halo of the protagonist, be safe and happy, have food and clothing without worries... It was just a pity that he was gone. Summary: The full text is not long, HE.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! *✧⁺˚⁺ପ(๑･ω･)੭ु⁾⁾

The story is relatively compact, with no major ups and downs and is relatively flat. There are many typos in the later period, but it does not affect reading. If you are short of books, you can take a look at it as a transition.

Many typos

Looks good

Finished reading it