Traveling to Ancient Times: Cannon Fodder Is Really Worth Killing Crazy.

I can't say whether it's a cool article or not, but it's very brainless. The plot design is like a fight between elementary school students. The villain's way of seeking death is to cause trouble everywhere, and the heroine's way of revenge is to find trouble... The characters are very childish in terms of dialogue and behavior patterns, and the design of the storyline is too intellectual.

It's pretty, I just like the heroine being in a coquettish state and doing things behind her back.

Nice

The first few chapters are quite good and feel quite novel. The plot will make people want to read on. The rest of it is like someone else has written it. The heroine's revenge is all passive rather than active, and she has no idea what the main plot is. The plot is all put together, and the dialogue between the characters is also very childish, like watching a three-year-old child quarreling, and the logic in many places does not make sense.

It's better to read it carefully. The author was a bit casual. There was a section in the middle about going to Changjiang that took too long, and then the ending was written in a hurry like rushing to the toilet. After reading this novel, both the author and the readers felt like rushing to go here🤣 In fact, the author could have done better if he had planned more carefully. I can't say it is more interesting, but the amazing thing is that I didn't miss a chapter and I read it all 😂 and I was fascinated! ! !

It's getting worse and worse, and it's already way off topic.

This is the end of writing. A novel that I can read, haha.

I write as I please

It's pretty good-looking. This refers to the first half (referring to the time when the female protagonist is pursuing a career in Beijing and the male protagonist also goes to pursue a career but does not come back). The second half is forced to write the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. The two of them are together, which is inexplicable. As for why it is said to be forced, it is because the male protagonist seems to have nothing to do. He forces himself to the female protagonist's side to have feelings for her. It is very abrupt. I don't understand it. Can't you two work hard in their careers and then meet somewhere and find that they are destined to fall in love? Why does the man force him to come back and stick with him (referring to the plot where the male protagonist goes to southern Xinjiang with the female protagonist. Is it really okay if you don't go back to the city and don't have to worry about government affairs and the people of Liming?) Moreover, the female protagonist is very smart whenever she is with the male protagonist. And I can't stand the fact that the male protagonist always wants to protect the female protagonist in the later stage but is not able to do so (after all, it's about immortality and metaphysics). Why can't he trust her to give her support and be her backer? You don't know how to do anything yourself, but you still follow me shamelessly, aren't you afraid of being held back? I'm really convinced. So do the male and female protagonists in this book only have one brain? The male protagonist or the female protagonist are both smart and clever when they are on their own, but together they always have to divide their brains in two halves to solve the problem by both using their wits. I don't quite understand... Finally, the villains here are quite interesting (including those who appear stupid and are killed by the heroine). I feel that the villains are better shaped than the protagonists. They are all logical and have a beginning and an end. There is nothing particularly stupid, they are all arrogant, especially the fake daughter who wants to die all day long, but good luck keeps her alive. It is very interesting, like a buffoon. It feels good to get retribution in the end. If she died too early, it would be meaningless. It takes this kind of entanglement of good and bad luck to feel relieved at the moment of her death. The main plot of the article to the ending is still very complete. If you can accept the love line of the male and female protagonists, you can give it a look!

If you are deprived of your luck, you don't have to make it up quickly. Can you make up for it slowly and bit by bit?