Danwu Supreme

The difference in force is too big

So verbose! It started out okay, but became more and more verbose later on!

Upgrade is too slow

This book is not about time travel, but about rebirth. Sometimes you talk in terms of hours, and sometimes you talk in terms of hours. Do you have no concept of time? Or they all say it according to the hour, and there are 5-6 hours left in a while. Is there a clock stamped on the forehead?

It is said that the protagonist is a reincarnated and powerful person, but regardless of his experience, character, ability, etc., He is childish and pitiful. The logic is childish, the writing is immature, and it doesn't look good.

The beginning was good, highlighting the word "Danwu", with very few typos, "Zhangguanlidai", etc. After the middle part, the mistakes gradually increased, "Ziwubutan", practicing all the way, fighting and devouring all the way, and finally became the supreme of "Ziwubutan"...

Too rubbish

The vitality is in the sea of ​​consciousness. The first time I saw it, it made me feel like I was walking with my hands, which overturned my common sense. It was a trap.

I think the two characters "venerable" are just to make up the number of words, or the author is too lazy to use the name.

Either they were fighting or on the way to fight. I felt tired just watching them, so I stopped watching.