Doomsday Descends: I Sign In Every Day

I would like to mention a few words based on my experience as a bookworm for six years and an author for three years. First of all, the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine was not handled well at the beginning. In my opinion (maybe I missed some details in The Crimson King), I only mentioned that the protagonist has been secretly in love with the heroine for three years, and then he still forced the heroine to be with him, and gave the gun to the heroine. I can only say that this trust is too abrupt, and the protagonist is suspected of being a bit love-minded. Then there is the plot in the laboratory. The protagonist sees the heroine in pain and has an emotional outburst, but there is no foreshadowing in the previous article (maybe I am the Crimson King), so this outburst is a bit embarrassing. The rest of the story is quite satisfactory. The author should improve his writing style on the emotional line. Moreover, whether the theme of daily sign-in is highlighted, there are so many chapters, and the topic of sign-in only appears less than five times, which feels a bit slow. And does the protagonist's strength improve a little too quickly? According to the daily sign-in, there are only three sign-ins in total (should it be?), And the time is only three or four days. The protagonist has changed from an ordinary person to a C-level. And the plot of these fifty or sixty chapters has been piled up in less than five days in the novel. Doesn't it seem a bit crowded? My suggestion is to slow down the speed at which the protagonist becomes stronger, strengthen the concept of time in the novel, issue some insignificant check-in tasks, and then give some insignificant things. For example, the task is to kill a few ordinary zombies and then give them a box of instant noodles or something like that. Of course, it is good to be devoid of literature, but if the plot is too tight, it will also make readers feel tired. A chapter or two of appropriate water is also necessary. In conclusion, there is still a lot of work to be done before the new book is launched, and the future is promising.

It turns out that it was all just a fantasy... Overall, it's pretty good, but the ending is quite surprising: "The 403rd simulation failed, and the 404th simulation begins..." The plot and power system are still very good, and book lovers are welcome to watch it.

No wonder the score is only 8.1. It was written about the end of the world and I gave this and that to a person I only knew for a few days. Why don't you give them all to others if you are so generous? Also, since I am writing a system article, can I write it clearly? Who else is not talking about the Virgin Bitch? I think she already has the meaning of the Virgin. I can't imagine what will happen next. I'm backing out and welcome the next entrant.

It's a pretty good novel, why are so few people reading it?

It's okay, I don't like the apocalypse. But I think this book is very good, and I hope the author will keep working hard! I hope the author's next book will be enjoyable!!! This is also my first time reading this kind of book. But I think this book is very interesting. Come on, author!

The male and female protagonists are a bit of a saint, and the plot is not that good. The male lead is good at first, but after the heroine comes out, she gradually becomes a bit of a saint. The system still allows people to be saved, which is very confusing.

You have to pay attention to this. If you cannot awaken your super power, your level will be higher than that of the protagonist instantly. Otherwise, this system will be useless. The protagonist will work hard to kill zombies and others will surpass him as soon as he awakens. This setting is found in many stupid books.

It's very good-looking. The main thing is that the ending is about aliens doing experiments on the earth and a dream.

Very pretty

It's very interesting. Can you update a few more chapters every day?