The Peerless Pill Emperor

So, what is the first posture of the Chunyang Duan Tifa called "Bending the Bow and Holding the Moon", how can you return the green dragon on the left, the white tiger on the right, and a 250 in the middle?

There are a lot of typos. Can you check it carefully? Although the writing is good, there are too many typos. There are really too many typos and it looks really tiring!

Every chapter must be reviewed after it is written, and you must be responsible to the readers. The sentences in the whole book make no sense. The readers have to guess what this sentence means and how to connect it to that sentence! It's so hard to read this book! I'm giving you a bad review and hope you write carefully and be responsible to the readers.

There are many typos in the book, and the text is very messy. The writing intention is good, and it should be connected to the peaceful Lanming Kingdom later, which would be more complete.

Too many typos

There are too many typos, but the key is that I can still understand it. The protagonist's aura is too heavy, too much of a virgin bitch. At the level of a martial artist, one can use complete magical skills to destroy the enemy (the skill has not been drained yet). A great martial artist or a spiritual master can use thunder to destroy the Martial Emperor. Wherever he goes, the opportunity belongs to the protagonist. In the early stage of the fight, the great gods who stayed in the mainland before were either at a higher level than their opponents. The war in the Celestial Empire was ruthless and had a bad temperament, so he would be easily angered if he disagreed (he had been to other continents for training, so he was not beaten to death at such a low level). When fighting, he was angry and wanted to destroy the protagonist's whole family. After cleaning up, he became enlightened. During the training in Xihuang, the Piaomiao Palace was surrounded and killed together, and they brought support to the Huangzong. However, the sect leader came to do the work alone, and he was moved to intercede for the enemy. During the training in the Shura Hell, the foreign tribe supported the Imperial Clan to destroy the Shura Royal Clan. As a result, the clan leader committed suicide when the Di Clan could not defeat them. The Di Clan was fine again, and the Luo Clan could let go of the hatred of genocide. In addition to Shura, there are hundreds of tribes in the Asura Hell. As a result, the most powerful indigenous ghost tribe has no allies after the protagonist appears, except for the Di clan who had previously controlled it and wanted to escape from control. After going out, I met my good friend Fatty Han and his family was arrested to refine magic weapons. They were all at a higher level than the demon gods in the lower world. They were even better than a lot of them. In the end, they killed the demon gods and his family was fine again. All the clan members who were arrested were let go. Returning to the Celestial Empire, a dandy in the realm of martial arts provoking the protagonist in the realm of the Lord God still has to write three chapters. It seems that no matter what level you are in, you have to wait for the other party to finish pretending and then jump out to pretend. The number of words is the same as in Zaishui. After reading 51% of it, I couldn't stand it anymore.

There are too many typos and it's very tiring to read! After reading a few chapters, I no longer want to read anymore.

The king calls himself Gu instead of me.

There are so many different characters that you have to use your brain to understand them clearly.

Knowledge and experience are not enough to control the reserve demand for knowledge and knowledge in rebirth fantasy. The logic loopholes are large and confusing, making the plot seem relatively immature.