After Sharing the Heir's Senses, I Disguised Myself as a Man and Revealed My Secret Identity

The plot is decent, but there are too many incorrect titles in the novel. The female lead's aunt's child calls her "Mom," and her aunt-in-law calls her "Aunt," while the emperor calls his own aunt "Aunt." Some events that happened earlier are repeated later as if nothing happened. I won't comment on the fact that the female lead packed up the food she ate, but surely not every girl would fall for a female lead disguised as a boy?

Many plot holes remain unfilled, and the titles are all jumbled up. One second they're writing about Lady Hou meeting Qin Xianghe to find a husband, and the next second it's the finale. The reasons why the male lead knew who the other person in the empathy was, how he knew the female lead was disguised as a man, and how she got pregnant are all left unexplained, and then the ending is forced upon us. It's truly laughable.

The writing is extremely chaotic; the author clearly didn't even bother to read it after finishing it, showing utter perfunctoriness. The timeline is particularly messy, the perspective is narrow, and it sounds more and more like rambling nonsense as it progresses, constantly repeating itself. There's even a scene where the female lead's mother actively reveals her identity—it made me laugh! What a whimsical author!

The plot is novel and captivating.

This book is so badly ending, it just doesn't connect! One second I'm seeing Deng Xun, the next I'm pregnant. Didn't they only have sex once? She's had her period, how could she be pregnant?

It was going to be a great story, but the author abruptly rushed the ending. The female lead had two periods and then suddenly became pregnant, which was baffling. Without explanation, how would the male lead know his cousin was a woman? Although the lovers eventually got together, it was a rather unconventional and disappointing ending.

What a mess! There were so many confusing parts in the middle, and this is the ending?! There are still so many things left unexplained! My period had already come, and now they say it's a few days late and I'm pregnant again. I'm speechless!

The male lead is so pitiful, but also hilarious. Forgive me for laughing, it wasn't very kind of me.