Delusional Separation

I have read the author's other two novels. The writing style is still good, but the completeness and excitement of the story are much weaker than the other two works. The first few dozen chapters of the novel are very depressing to read. The male protagonist is too tolerant and partial to the disgusting mother and son, especially Jian He's incomprehension towards the female protagonist's continuous verbal abuse but inaction. Especially when he has been secretly in love with the female protagonist for many years and got his wish to marry a beautiful woman. Shouldn't he cherish and love the female protagonist even more? Why was she suppressed and hurt? I think this is the biggest problem of this novel. Even if Jian He blocks the gun in the end to clear his name, it is not enough to offset the mental harm she has done to the heroine. Maybe the author wants to express the hero's sense of responsibility and compassion that extends to others, but this is a bit "Mother's Heart and Taisumary", which is very unreal. This novel becomes more and more exciting later on. The male protagonist turns out to be the shadow of his elder brother. The brothers fight for their identity and fight each other. As a result, many of the male protagonist's words have nothing to say and even cannot be defended. The story is still very novel. The female protagonist's character is still very good. She speaks directly, dares to love and hate, has clear thinking, and also has a psychological journey towards the changes in the male protagonist's feelings. It's still reasonable. The only thing is that she should hate the male protagonist more in the early stage. After all, from her perspective, her husband has a son and another woman outside, and he still tolerates and tolerates without restraint. Under this background and premise, it is impossible for a woman with such a clear love and hatred to have other emotions besides disgust and hatred. Another bug is that the male protagonist told the female protagonist that the child was not his, but the female protagonist had inadvertently seen the DNA paternity test of the male protagonist and the child very early on, but she did not question it at all and raised it in person. To be more reasonable, you shouldn't write that the heroine accidentally read the paternity test report before.

Overall, it was pretty good to watch, but the plot was a bit draggy. For example, every time the male protagonist wanted to explain, the female protagonist would interrupt and then I wouldn't listen, and then she would repeat the misunderstanding, trying to explain, and interrupt. . . This kind of plot happens too often and it gets a little boring. It would be better if it was more streamlined

It's really good. Why doesn't the author update it?

Ahhhh??? Haven't you finished writing? Oh my god