Peerless War King

It's good, just update it soon.

Very perfect

At the beginning of the novel, a little girl was tortured and killed. Ye Jiuzhou came back to save his daughter, and then the child was taken away for treatment. Later, it was said that Xie Zhiqiu was a virgin and the two were not yet married. I wonder what the author thinks?

The storytelling plot is vivid, thrilling, tense and fascinating. Seeing the Zhang place makes people forget about it and can't put it down. Great book!

After reading the beginning, I have no appetite to read further. A man whose wife and children have been bullied to this extent will not kill anyone who bullies his wife and children. What kind of bloody spirit does such a man have? Such a book cannot be exciting.

Incomprehensible

What did you write? When I first started writing about the child, he was already a few years old. After reading more than 50 chapters, he said that the two protagonists had not yet slept together, and Zhi Qiu was still a baby.

The logic is unclear and the background sections are confusing; the character development of the protagonist is unclear and illogical; he is a soldier, but lacks decisiveness in killing; the protagonist has poor logical thinking and can only make up for the situation instead of strategizing, which is not enough to support his achievement of supreme status! (The author either has a low cultural level, or has no experience in the world, and his logical thinking is too poor)

In the beginning, Ye Buhui called Ye Jiuzhou to come back and rescue her and Xie Zhiqiu, but in the end, Ye Buhui finished the novel before he even finished two chapters. What kind of bullshit novel was he writing?

Very beautiful,