Siheyuan: Graduated and Entered the First Machinery Department, Everyone Cried with Envy

First of all, the biological father of the main character is Liu Haizhong, and then he writes that he is an orphan in the second part. Then he calls Liu Haizhong the second uncle and father. Then at the beginning, the protagonist joins the army as soon as he graduates. Later, he writes about people who will be kicked out by other factories. It is really wrong to watch!

The author's writing skills are so bad. Let's not talk about the plot first. The preface does not match the postscript. The content changes at any time. I don't know what he is writing.

The plot of this book is quite interesting, but one thing is that the plot is very confusing. Things I just mentioned in the last second seem to have been forgotten the next second, as if I just knew it. Moreover, the character settings in it also change, giving me a feeling that this book does not seem to be written, but like it was copied, and it was not copied well.

What are you writing about? One moment the son in the bangs and the other the second uncle? Sometimes your home is in the Northeast and sometimes in the capital? ! Poisonous

To be honest, I was quite excited to watch it, but the key is that the logic is too confusing. The condition of the heroine's family was not good for a while, and the elder brother was there for a while. She had a son for a while, and gave birth to a son for a while. It was really too chaotic.

The writing is elegant. What era is it? Ancient times?

It just feels very confusing! I really don't know how to write it! How could a normal person write like this? The name changes one at a time, the background of the character is one now and then that! I'm confused when a new name appears!

If it's not that there are multiple authors, it's that the author is wrong. The preface and postscript of the whole article don't match.

AI article: sometimes an orphan, sometimes a father, sometimes an adopted son

I don't know what I'm writing.