Your Majesty, You Call This a Fallen Humble Family?

I really have nothing to say. It can be seen that this is the first time for the author to write this kind of genre or the first time to write a novel. The following is just my personal opinion. If it is useful, listen to it. If it is not useful, discard it. The first dynasty is unclear, and the historical knowledge is even worse. You can write about parallel universes. You can at least write an outline. There is a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west. The imperial examination is a rigorous thing. It is simply divided into local and central governments. First, it is the children's examination. It is divided into counties and colleges. These three are to obtain the status of scholar, then the provincial examination and the provincial examination. Once every three years, there is the national examination, then the central examination, the tribute examination, and finally the palace examination. Second, the examination terms are wrong, common sense errors. Third, the time is chaotic, and the character relationship is a piece of rubbish. There is not even one piece. Fourth, have you really read the book? I feel really uncomfortable. Normally when I read a novel, I finish reading it all before stopping, but this book is an exception. I really can't stand it anymore, but I have wasted so much time. Fifth, Guangshuang does not consider logic, and suggests that the high school politics class should not be written like this. Sixth, if it really doesn't work, go search deepseek or beanbao. I will give you some suggestions and improve the book.

First of all, the relationship between the characters is confusing. From the second uncle to the third uncle, who is Lu Congzhi? Second, when you were selling storybooks, one was about to go bankrupt and the other was Dragon Crossing the River, which was very wealthy. You, a little bastard, didn't want to sell more money. Instead, you jumped into the whirlpool of business competition between the two companies and sold it to the store that was about to go bankrupt. When Journey to the West becomes famous, you will see if the Dragon Crossing the River will kill you. You are just looking for trouble and are seeking death yourself. Third, when buying the four treasures of the study, the first thing you need is a langhao pen, Hui ink, and Duan inkstone. Author, do you know what these things are? It is no exaggeration to say that it is equivalent to the Ferrari Lamborghini in the automotive industry. Is this something that a poor guy like the Lu family can consider? Fourth, a set of high-end items with the four treasures of the study, two taels of silver? Brother, in the background of your novel, scholars are extremely valuable. Two taels of silver can buy a high-end study room with four treasures. So will scholars still be so valuable? After reading about twenty chapters, these basic logics and settings are completely in conflict.

Although there are some names and sloppiness in the plot, it does not affect the development of the entire plot. This book is really well written, the articles are well laid out, the rhythm is clear, it is not boring to read, and it is in-depth. You can carry your mind with you when reading, and the writing style is also excellent. At the same time, the author's grasp of history and the portrayal of characters, especially the emperor, are just right. For the emperor, his majesty can be revealed between the lines, and it also creates a sense of mystery, reflecting the divinity of the king of a country. It avoids the problem that many novels describe the emperor as too humanized, which goes too far and makes the emperor look stupid. Overall, this is a very recommendable book, and I hope there will be more and more good books like Qimao. I wish Qimao better and better!

This kind of ancient reading novels are really the same, starting with an incompetent father, a cowardly mother, a sinister brother, and the protagonist can only rely on himself to sell his ass to make money to pay for school. There is really no freshness.

Very good, one link after another, one button after another. ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧Very exciting

I have read Chapter 118 so far. Advantages: The plot structure is progressive, not procrastinating, and conforms to the structure of a refreshing novel. The writing is relatively smooth to read through, and the relationship between the characters is handled well. Disadvantages: 1. Chapter 6 writes that the younger brother is 3 years old. Shouldn't a three-year-old baby be brought by his parents? 2. Write the younger brother as 3 years old in the front and 5 years old in the back. The surnames of Wang and Zhao were mistakenly described one after another. 3. The Gao family invited Pig's Feet to study, and the reply was: He didn't consider any other school, turned around to the Lin family and invited him, and accepted it directly? It seems uncomfortable to wait for the inconsistent problems. 4. The protagonist's father is the eldest son, who has read books after all. His character structure is that of an honest person who doesn't say anything. Her mother comes from a wealthy family. Can she really like such an honest person? Shouldn't it be his ability to read that you are interested in? 5. And because my grandfather's last words were that he should take good care of his brothers, so shouldn't he who studied well at that time go to study? The protagonist's father is not good at reading, and he didn't arrange the plot of a bloody hero saving a beauty. How can his mother like it? Not logical. 6. Some of the previous paragraphs describe his third uncle and his third aunt's struggle for a position in school. It is understandable that when his third uncle was supported to study, his level was not clearly explained. 7. Since the Lu family is set up as a family of farming and studying, why is it that the whole family is studying only in his third uncle's family, and what about the others? Was there no one written by the author? Since the entire Lu family is still motivated, shouldn't the entire clan support a few more seedlings? The author of Mingwen should be 13 years old and have been studying for 3 years. I still rely on this small family to support my studies. Also, is there no school in the village that teaches literacy? 8. This article never explains whether the second child is dead or has gone somewhere? What is the author doing? There is no suspense in the ambush, but there is no such description. Is the second child dead? 9. It is never clear which dynasty it is in the previous article, but Zhang Juzheng is mentioned in the latter part, which should be from the Ming Dynasty. The author wanted to write an imaginary historical article similar to the Ming Dynasty, but he brought out historical celebrities. 10. The protagonist is a scholar, and the county magistrate comes to welcome him. The county magistrate is at least a scholar. It is enough to arrange for the scholar to parade in the streets, but also to ask the whole people to welcome the scholar, and the county magistrate also bows to the scholar. Is the author funny? My personal opinion, if you don't like it, don't comment.

It's very good-looking. It's not the same as other ancient poems. Although this kind of writing is also refreshing, it can make people read it.

The plot is okay, with prominent contradictions and distinct characters. Unfortunately, the author's writing style and logic are really poor and inconsistent. There are only eight people in the family. The last name changes back and forth (the same person, now Wang, now Liu), uncles change back and forth (sometimes third uncle, now third uncle). The protagonist's mother, said in the first chapter that she has never been wronged, and in the next chapter she said that she has been wronged all the time. The left and right brains are fighting each other, right? Author, can't you draw a relationship diagram and refer to it when writing? It's all mistakes, it's so disturbing, I can't stand it anymore

It's ok, the quality is very good, the protagonist is smart, understands the dangers of officialdom and people's hearts, and has integrity. It's a good read. Please support it. I hope it can be updated more every day and it won't be unfinished. Come on, the author.

Either I didn't leave a note or it was written by AI. Why is the rating still over 9 points? My age is all messed up. It's really NB.