At the Beginning of Journey to the West, Sign in the Heaven for 100,000 Years

There's something wrong with the beginning. And that Dao Dao grape is not an innate treasure. Daozu is not that proud. There were only three innate treasures in the prehistoric times.

As for my cool novel, "13 years of prehistoric times and 100,000 years of the Earth's prehistoric times", my wife died after being reborn. Isn't it a good ending? In the end, it chilled everyone and the characters in the novel. Good reviews can be deleted. If you are not imaginative enough, you can rewrite it in a new version. Suppose this is a pavement for improving your realm. I have never seen a book that can't be mentioned in hundreds of chapters. It is the first time I see a cultivator who turns himself into an ant.

When doing big things, you should use a disguise technique.

There are some mistakes in writing. I suggest you read other ancient books.

What is written behind this?

Isn't it nice to end when you have written more than 500 chapters? After defeating the demons, taking in the harem, and starting a happy and beautiful life, it was completely over. The following article can completely compose a new novel, let's say a great power, when he has enlightenment, he loses his cultivation and compiles a new novel. Between more than 500 chapters before and after more than 500 chapters, except for the male protagonist, everything else has changed. This is unacceptable to me, and it is seriously off topic!

The plot is too weak, the plot is lacking, the writing is too ordinary, the thinking is too childish, and the logic is taken for granted.

The most critical points, 1 A saint must become a saint by combining the three corpses, which means that the saint himself is the three corpses. Taishang Laojun and Bodhi are the external incarnations of the saint. The saint does not leave the world, but travels in the three realms in external incarnation. 2 The broom star is a star official with a medium-level official position, not a sweeper. 3 At first, the system said that Hongmeng Purple Qi is necessary to become a saint. Later, Haotian became a saint and said that Hongmeng Purple Qi was not needed to become a saint. Nuwa also relied on Hongmeng Purple Qi. Hongmeng Purple Qi is a kind of heavenly restriction. To prove the Tao by force does not require Hongmeng Purple Qi. 4 The first one resisted 10% of the Saint's attack, but later it was said that Saints are all ants, and they can easily kill any quasi-Saint without taking action. The fighting power is chaotic. 5. What's going on behind the scenes, Dao Ancestor? If your cultivation level is gone, you can be considered as half a person who has demonstrated the Tao with strength. Your body is higher than your cultivation level, so why are you still being hunted by ordinary people? I won't talk about other small places, there are too many, please have a deeper understanding of the book of prehistoric times. But the idea is good, come on!

Let the author continue writing novels like this

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